| Reviews for Checks and Balances |
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xThomas2 chapter 1 . 1/5/2019 I'm curious why the Angels didn't save him. Pretty sure they could do that. Does this mean DragonBall will have blood and dying instead of water from now on? I think DBS doesn't have blood. DBZ did. |
cdiokno.sj chapter 1 . 4/25/2018 Holy Shit Moth, I think I like your version of the events better. Still, it's so weird to read this in the sub voices, they just sound so...higher pitched than what you'd expect the characters to sound like. Overall, great |
AkumaKami64 chapter 1 . 3/26/2018 Oi, I have so many issues with this. First, there was nothing to fix. Despite what you say, Zeno PLANNED the end- which, by the way, 17 won, not Goku. He is literally God. While not completely omniscient, forsaw that the universes would be wished back. If that prediction was wrong, there something very wrong and thus the multiverse would have needed a restart. Now onto the real problems. First off, Zeno is unkillable, above and beyond everything else. Future Zeno's existence is proof of this as Zamasu couldn't kill him in the future. The Gods of Destruction, even combined, would have never held a candle to him. Second, if you haven't figured it out yet? Yes, the ToP was partially for Zeno's enjoyment, yes, but it was also to address the issue of the low average power levels of the universes. Thinking that this Tournament was for keeps made everyone fight for their lives and get stronger, and than they get brought back because one mortal was virtuous enough to wish them all back. Also, the Grand Priest would not have just stood there. Zeno's guards I imagine could have taken any of the Gods, but the Grand Priest could have taken all of them. And also, no, the Gods were not prepared for what they did. They literally destroyed the only thing keeping the Multiverse in line and probably the only being that can make more universes and destroy them if they get like Zamasu's. They have just fucked themselves royally. Last but not least, despite what some may think, being God in most cases(including this) does put you above Good and Evil, Checks and Balances, and death itself. He literally exists beyond it all. Look, I get that some don't like Zenny, but this isn't a fixfic. A fixfic would either have them confront Zeno where either Zeno or Grand Priest, as a courtesy, explains things properly. Or go the crappy way by having them turn/teach Zeno into being a more proper God-characters. This? This is just a bashfic and a hatefic. PS For the record, I wasn't a huge fan of Zeno until the very last episode and realized he planned all this. I thought he was interesting as a concept before that, but I loved what he turned out to be. Not an irresponsible being of absolute power, but a quirky child-like one that has a lot more going on in his noodle than he gets credit for. Later Gator. |
Darksymphony777 chapter 1 . 3/25/2018 i wonder if you should change the story to match the actual winner (17) but it's your story |
Irdom chapter 1 . 3/24/2018 Glad to know I'm not the only one who feels this way about Zeno |
shadowenclave47 chapter 1 . 3/23/2018 Nice to see Zeno getting what he deserved. |
The Unkindness chapter 1 . 3/19/2018 Great chapter. It always annoyed that there was nobody else to teach Zeno and Future Zeno about good and wrong. As a sugestion, have another fix it story where the same Zeno from Goku's timeline is the one to come when Vegetto would press the button. Then you could have Vegetto tell Zeno to take Fused Zamasu immortality away in order for him to beat him. Hopefully you listen to my sugestion. Have a nice day |
Lillith The Nocturnal chapter 1 . 3/18/2018 Damn. |
Grand Spirit Master chapter 1 . 3/18/2018 I have to say this was quite a read with the Gods of Destructions finding common ground with Zen-oh being nothing more of a toddler misusing life changing powers similar to the assassination of Julius Caesar. |
Highlord Langslock chapter 1 . 3/18/2018 The two Zen-Ohs could have avoided their fate simply by agreeing to balance each other. One would argue in favor of preserving all universes while the other would insist to n destroying them. Of course, neither of them would actually care one way or the other, but they would have reached a compromise with the gods of destruction and things would be a little less boring for them. But yeah, the Zen-Ohs had to go. |
LoamyCoffee chapter 1 . 3/17/2018 Indeed. |