Great story. I binge read both parts in a day's time. By not sleeping of course, but hey, who's got time for sleep?
I think the ending was bitter. Not bittersweet, no. It's bitter with a lull to it. Like the feeling of "Ah, it's bitter."
Sometimes, I think that's what death will feel like. Like "Ah, so this is death." Ending with not a bang but a whisper. Totally not suicidal, but one gets curious about the abyss in the corner from time to time.
I feel like the consequences of her actions will be dire though. The great villages never reunited, so they will still be alternating between wars and treaties. The Ootsutsuki clan is still around. And Naruto and Sasuke aren't the gods they turn out to be with the Six Path Sage chakra. And Naruto doesn't get to use his Talk no Jutsu nearly as much and also doesn't end up a hero of Konoha and thus need to work harder to better his reputation as a whole.

fUCK—

I loved it! It was an amazing story!

sob

Oh. But. Why did she behave like a reckless woman with nothing to live? Did she really have no faith in her family? I’m confused. She didn’t need to go all out like that, no?

Dear god. This entire fic was amazing. And the previous one too. You might think it’s cringey but jeez was this an amazing afternoon. I love the characters and the way you wrote them, the plot was so different compared to all the other fic like this that I’ve read, and included a bit of everything I personally like in a naruto self insert fanfic. (pulling out a purple lightsaber to kill obito certainly adds to that).
So Thank you so much for the fantastic read and have a brilliant day.

Hello there-

after powering through this story in it's entirety it feels only appropriate to leave at least one sign of my appreciation of this masterful work- of the delight it gave me to experience this riveting journey with your amazing protagonist, riding through the ups and downs with them- no matter how little one more review might actually mean in the grand scheme of things.
As you've mentioned in this last chapter that you're not all that satisfied with how this behemoth of a fanfiction turned out I feel a bit like it's my duty as a reader to tell you how avidly I loved... well, just about everything about this, I suppose.

The characters are incredibly intricate; showing just enough differences to canon that you've created them anew but never straying so far as to seem- unnatural- compared to what we know of OC is... loveable, kind, at times relateable and never shows that certain tint of inhumanity characters gain quickly when they lack a detailed backstory- or appear to lack the long term memory to keep their relationships with others in mind~
It is true that she gains a definite mary sue element towards the end, as you yourself jokingly remarked in one of the later chapters, but the entire story takes a bit of a crackish turn at that point and I, for one, enjoyed the implied cynisism and humour immensely.
The light hearted moments in this made the ones pulling one back to the darker aspects of the premise of being reborn in such a harsh environment shine all the more and turned this into an all in all very riventing read :) This is like the fix-it we never deserved; the one that is still firmly routed in the reality of the rather war torn shinobi world as described in the later chapters of naruto- making it seem that much more, well, cannon, itself.

I have nothing left to say, really- except, perhaps, how much I admire you for this being, as you stated, your first work. For this turning out as great as it is.
And thank you, I suppose, as I tend to thank all of your fellow writers and free authors- as I would thank bestseller writing ones, personally, if I could- thank you for providing me with inspiration, an escape, moments of happiness and sorrow alike; thank you for sharing this story and enabling us to come along for this ride~
Uh, well, I suppose my ranting has gone on for long enough now and hope you're not too bothered for time when getting to reading this, or you might not appreciate it all that much :P my apologies should that be the case.
I'll just go cry my heart out because of that ending now, have a nice day~

Stay happy, healthy and sane in these trying times, I look forward to reading you again!

Thank you, again,
Sincerely yours

Voce pode nao entender minha lingua, mais vou dizer assim mesmo, eu me apaixonei por essa hsitoria, eu chorei quando Hisoka tava pra morrer pra receber suas asas, so fico triste por nao poder ter lido um poucomajs sobre o relacionamento de dela com shikamaru, uma coisa e certa, des de Meu mordoml favorito (fanfiction de fairy tail) essa e a melhor fanfiction que ja li, meus parabens, vc e uma escritora maravilhosa, se tiver tempo por favor faz algum oneshot do relacionamento de hisoka e shikamaru

Ps: sabe que no momento que escutei sobre demonio hisoka na sua historia eu pensei em hisoka de hunter x hunter kkk provavelmente foi o nome mais me lembro muito meu perssonagem de hunter x hunter favorito

woohoo! i enjoyed this ride start to finish!

i found this story because i found Dear Hart first. There was moments were i was uneasy with this story but i stuck it out because the premise was a good one and there are so few finished Naruto stories that are any good (This is like the second one i've ever read). i've just read this story, and it's prequel, over nine hours. it's now 3am and i should have gone to bed 4 hours ago, but this, this was worth it. your story, your plot, your character development, the way you develop this story and brought it to a close. yes, it saddens me that she doesn't get her happy ending with Shika, but it also fits. not everyone gets a happy ending, and yet, she ensured that her precious people got that happy ending.

we all knew where this was going, but, motherfucker. It still hurts.

I’m somewhat sad but understanding this is how it ends for Noa. She’s similar to a star, burning so brightly and fiercely but sadly they burn out. The energy kind of destroying itself. She did too much and her body couldn’t keep up.
It’s a bittersweet ending and you did a good job with it. Thank you for all your hard work on this! My only question now is will there be an Epilogue to see what happens in the aftermath in her passing? All the best to you!

Hi.. you know.. this review would be my First and last review... I do not remember when I Started to read your Story... but because of this ending I am really sad... It was a good ending... but you Know... Skika y Noa... I was weating for their story, and it was so sad when they were saying their Dream live...as a goodbye... thanks for your work... maybe can we wait for a epilogue? O maybe that would more sadness than this last chapter...I Don’t know... thanks.

thank you for all the time and effort you put into entertaining my dumbass

i wish there's an alternate ending... TT