Love it plz update

This is an Excellent story!

Except for the part where you mutate the people's names (minister BAN-gold, really?)
And the bit where everyone's personality is changed
And the bit where LILY sends a patronus to Sirius, but you hear James' voice too
And the bit where every person is acting like a petulant 5-year old
And the bit where you have the Ministry fully staffed at 8:30 at night. Not likely!
And the bit where you randomly Uppercase a word just for the heck of it. Unless Sirius became a deity or royalty, he surely should not be referred to as "Him". Nor should he have "Responded" in the middle of a sentence.
And the bit where...
And...

Bye!

This writter is one of the most sadist. Thus has humour as a genre but all I have read is rape and rape, may be for this moron writter rape is something to joke about or fun. This has to be the worst ff I have ever come across. This ff is simply disgusting.

So far your story is crap, you haven’t progressed into any of the actual details. It’s just another typical story we’re death eaters are all serial rapists. I mean seriously this idea has serious flaws like how death eaters would only kill muggles and muggle born individuals. Death eaters believed even being in the same vicinity as them was nauseating. So good on you for not being imaginative and only being able of conceiving rape and murder cause they did considerably more but they didn’t really rape. Then the big issue with the story is how little you’ve produced and how slow your being. Your taking literally 3 chapters when all you need is one.

I’m really hoping you start time skipping cause 14 chapters five of which have been wasted on something that could have been done and over with in 1 chapter is ridiculous

Looking forward to the next chapter when it's ready.

So far, the only complaint I have is you're using the word trail instead of trial. Trail is a path, trial is held in court.

Please update this is really good so far
-prongs

Marcus won't be getting any mercy from Arthur for kidnapping his daughter. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!

This story is amazing I love it

LOL

You are fucked up in the head. I hope the authorities get you help.

Love the chapter

Liked it, keep up the good work

The next one?

cool story so far, would prefer slightly longer chapters in the future but beggers can't be choosers. Looking forward to your next update.