She should have turned 18 already, on July 31, 1998, since it’s august 18, 1998, it’s after her birthday

A little short but your writing is improving can’t wait for more update soon plz

I’m enjoying your work I look forward to more

I needs a slight edit some grammar and phrasing could be better but the premise has me hooked. I think this could be a brilliant and if your up for it a hopefully long and intriguing story, I look forward to reading more of you work.

this is a great story are you going to continue it at all

i hope you don't make the whole, animal drinkers being good vampires and the ones drinking human blood evil vampires. there are so many of those stories that it gets boring. after all, not all witches/wizards are evil, same with real wearwolves (remus, not the pack, they are shifters) there are both good and bad, so i hope you don't have them try and push their views on Hari.

kind of surprised that Hari didn't notice Rosealie sit by her. with her years of fighting and things trying to kill her, you think her senses would be on high aleart.

Please continue and please, put Teddy in the story also! To came and live with her or something. I just adore him.

Please update soon

Damn now I feel bad for the Weasley clan

I like how you are writing this. I have always prefered that the Potterverse joined the twilightverse as apposed to the other way around. Their meeting was adorable

I like it

I like it. Especially the pairing. All I can say is just add more to it. It feels like you cut yourself off or you left out information in places. That's all I gotta say. Can't wait for more

Jeep wrangler started in 1986...

I usually don't read much slash stories, but I really like this one and I'm thinking I should read more. I didn't know what I was missing. Please update!