Love this story but are you still alive? It’s been two months since you updated the story and with all the shit that’s going on rn you never know.

If you do still draw breath I absolutely cannot wait til the next update to any of your stories as yours tend to be fresh and interesting compared to the vast majority on this site.

Love your stories, I hope to see more for this one!

I have to admit, I didn’t think I was going to see this again. I remember finding it at some point last year or something and, while short, got me super into it with just the beginning. Seeing it again updated and the possibility of more has me really excited for this fanfic and I’ll definitely be following it this time. As for the notes, I have to agree about the style they have going since I personally felt devastated when sun and moon first started after the nice sharp style of x/y. I’ll certainly miss it but have mostly avoided the anime at this point too so null point. As for the story itself, it’s great seeing some of the Pokémon ash is getting onto the team like nidorino (one of my favorites when I first started playing) and vibrava with flygon being a beast. Admittedly curious as to what interactions with the manga characters will be like and I can’t wait for more, thanks for updating this!

Good story, though he will be on a lot of surprise with the amount of shit that is going to happen

Good first chapter

Ash is making his daddy proud by catching these ground types. Fuck around and he might even catch a Rhydon to get Rhyperior ... Anyways, this fic is a great fucking time! This is a more realistic take to a canon Ash when it comes to his mature views, knowledge and OPness. I could easily see something like this happening if he were to ever go through the Indigo league from scratch, solo. Also, I'm really interested in seeing his interactions with Red/Blue/Green/Yellow/every fucking color of the rainbow and element of the periodic table. Might even give Red a couple of pointers on how to raise Pikachu...! Actually, scratch that, our Boii might actually tear up when seeing the mouse :(... Still, pretty excited to see the conversations between them :). He'll probably find Blue an even bigger asshat than Gary. Man, this story has some great potential to be a fantastic journey! I'm hyped! But yeah, that's all I really have to say for now. Stay safe, take care of yourself, wash your hands, and stay the fuck at home and write more Ash fics :D! See ya next update!

Damn, Ash is catching some big threats. But they all got a soft spot. They're just a bunch of scary lookin cinnamon rolls UwU.

Holy hell, this premise is genius! Why has no one else wrote something like this?! Ash in the mangaverse has a shit ton of potential!

is there any way for pikachu to be with ash right now it just doesn't feel right if pikachu isn't with ash

Don’t be discouraged! I don’t think FFN is dead, but I’ve recently been on a Pokémon binge, and looking through the Pokémon Archive there seem to be a lot of really bad stories. Either it’s badly written, or the premise is cliche (how many betrayal stories can there be?). Your story will probably get more reviews when the chapter number goes up, and people notice it more as a result.

Just wanted to say, thanks for writing this! I’ve always had a similar idea, but I haven’t gotten around to writing it (if I ever will). Anyways, I’m really liking your story so far. Can’t wait to see how you answer why and how Ash landed in the Adventure verse! Keep up the good work!

Why is everyone surprised with the potions and pokeballs? I remember they also have one in the manga..

vibrava nice update soon

nicely done

nice stuff dude

As always this is just really interesting keep it up