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Maria Elena chapter 11 . 7/6 Han pasado dos años Por favor sigue. Gracias México 6 julio 2020 |
mysteryheart chapter 11 . 7/6 won't you please update? this is a great story |
Lucifer-Sterling chapter 11 . 5/20 are you going to update? please do |
tiffanythibedeau chapter 11 . 1/7 love the story. please update soon. |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/3 Your twist to get Harry onto the Quidditch team was ridiculous. Did you forget you made him a self-preserving Slytherin? I could see him jumping to save the day if he was an impulsive, brash Gryffindor, but not a Slytherin. Additionally, as you've written things, he doesn't even like Longbottom and has a grudge against him. So why would he jump on his broom (when he's never even flown before) to save the idiot? The scene was jarring and not very well reasoned of you, but yes, it got him on the team without reenacting the rememberall scene in some fashion. I just hope, after reading this contrived, OOC scene, that you don't have Harry enacting all of his canon Gryff idiocy for each subsequent year. If you do, then why put him in Slytherin? |
nikolasowa chapter 11 . 12/14/2019 Please update! |
Bornthismiu chapter 11 . 10/9/2019 The story is amazing. I really like you writing style which does not happen to me that often. And i really like how you push the characters into developing slowly. I hope to see a new chapter soon! |
Shire Fey chapter 11 . 10/1/2019 I am not sure how like it is you will continue this story given the time since your last update but even if you never write another chapter I want you to know how much I enjoyed this story. Thank you for taking the time to post and let others read this, get inspired by it, crave more of it, and of course read reviews left by those of us still here. I wish you luck in this and all future stories! Shire |
reberebecca chapter 11 . 8/22/2019 Wow! Questo capitolo solo wow. Un Harry che inizia la sua salita. Mi piace che in qualche modo sia una tregua tra Draco e Harry. E mi piace questo cameratismo con Voldemort. L’unica pecca che era l’ultimo capitolo Speri Aggiorna presto |
reberebecca chapter 10 . 8/21/2019 È una storia contorta è un Harry oscuro . Spero che non si perderà. Però mi piace che non sia il ragazzino ingenuo è patetico. |
reberebecca chapter 6 . 8/21/2019 Un Harry affascinato dalle arti oscure... e Theodore è un personaggio di cui o letto poco. Che accoppiata |
reberebecca chapter 4 . 8/21/2019 Sembrava una storia senza pretese invece mi ha stupito in positivo. Trovo che nonostante tratta parti che abbiamo letto e riletto in tante storie rimane con un pizzico di originalità e non scontata. Mi piace! |
reberebecca chapter 3 . 8/21/2019 Sempre più interessante sempre più affascinante! |
reberebecca chapter 2 . 8/21/2019 Molto interessante questa storia. La spiegazione di Severus per Harry penso che sia eccezionale. La prima che leggo che abbia una logica è una spiegazione soddisfacente. Complimenti |
cinhtay chapter 11 . 8/15/2019 You lie, you said at the beggining this story was finished |