Please continue, you're a really good writer. You're doing really well with the characters, granted I haven't seen the show in a while, the only one who seems slightly OCish is Aqualad so far and even then I don't mind it because I hardly paid attention to him. Only a few grammatical errors but its not that big of a deal, as you can hardly notice them, I only noticed them because I got distracted while reading so I had to reread the paragraphs. This is currently a story I would reread if it gets completed (I hate drop-endings but I don't blame y'all authors if you don't finish it). I wish there was a bit more detail in the torture (my own personal preference) but I understand it's not for everyone.

PLEASE UPDATE SENPAI~ I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCHHH

Okay, 1st I really like the cover. 2nd The plot is AWESOME! You brilliant person! Your writing is good too, though it could use some proper punctuation. I mean no offence, just trying to help. I hope you update soon, cause it's been months! I am 100% sure that I would still be pro RaeRob if the show went that way. I'd actually like them even more. ʕ•ﻌ•ʔ

i like the story and am patienlty waiting your good keep writing and add some spaxe between changes

When I started reading this fic I thought I would not be interested at first, but I gave it a chance and continued reading over the other chapters. As I did I continually got more and more into the story. You made the characters act in a way that I can imagine them acting in the show. Though the writing itself may have a couple mistakes I believe you made it up with an excellent plot. I wonder on how you develop the romance between Robin and Raven and how would the team react to it. My apologies for typing a whole paragraph but I just wanted to express my love and appreciation towards this piece of art. I hope my review would be enough to persuade you into finishing this.

Good story so far, but quotation marks seem to be missing from dialog other than that this is a good story so far.

hey its a good story but it ia hars to follow without any structure. dialogue needs to have quotations and be seperated from the place descriptions. for exaple:
The titans came up on the docks. Scattered all around were the mutalated robotic bodies of slades robot , Robin was definitely here", stated Cyborg glumly.
Yeah but where the check did he go?asked Beast Boy pointedly.

hope the hiatus ends soon I was just starting to really enjoy this!

¡Hola, Hola! Hey there fellow Titefan,
I'm unsure of what a review from me can do but I am hopeful it will help you add a skip in your outside life of here. a lot of people can be very demanding when it comes to wanting an individual to update a story but I am patient enough. I only hope that you don't leave it hanging on a cliff. as usual this is beautiful gorgeous written and I find myself hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter to come out. The just so you are aware you know you can take your time with this right? I mean, I'd rather have you write when you are happy and relaxed rather than anxious and worrisome I went to get the next chapter out. so again please take your time with this. Get yourself together in your real life and when you are happy go ahead and come back whenever you deem fit. I hope you have yourself a beautiful time away from your home.

i feel like the lack ofmakes it hard for me to tell when smbd is talking. it would be nice if there could be some kids n the future XD

Yo, nice story. Just a quick question, when is chapter 13 onwards coming out? Can't wait.

EZ

Keep at it! Don't let life put you in a corner. Stick to what you enjoy doing and don't back down from it! Oh, and I am really enjoying the story!

this is dope pls continue

I'm so confused in the show is depicted that Raven has a bond with Robin so she would have know how to locate where he was and his emotions( she's and empath).

Good story however I'm confused some part where the characters are saying some it there's no ". "
It only narrated.