I was so sad when I first read what happened in the first narrative. I very much approve of the Doctor, traveler of time, is brought into the narrative. The old Victoria and the Old Lord M look down on their younger selves and smile. I love happy endings.

Please continue this story!

This was good and was much easier to read :-)

(Again, grammatical errors) but I love the idea.

I really liked the gist of this! A lot of grammatical errors to be fixed but great ideas.