One spelling error. I like that you have both Billy and Rebecca, but by the same token, I'm a little annoyed by it; just because one is present doesn't mean that they both have to appear or that they're a couple/item. Still, I look forward to seeing how your story progresses.

I really love this fiction, I just want the next chapter ! Your ideas are just wonderful and I can't stop your story !

Im so late reading this but great chapter! Im so glad to see another update from you. Finally they meet! I can't wait to see the reveal. Keep up the great work.

I come back to two chapters! Oh you spoil me so! Claire is finally going to the island. Im so excited for that reveal. I can't wait. Great chapter as always

Ok - so I gotta love the way you tackle a whole new thing while keeping it familiar. I dig it. I also love your profile that lists all your OC's. Girl, you are all imagination, I love it.

I enjoy trying to figure out the Lamb. I hope you can keep me from knowing too much and coming back for more. I really like that I have no clue where you're going with it. That's what keeps me reading: trying to guess what's coming next.

Great Story so far! Make more.

Another chapter! I really like the direction this story is going in. So many possibilities! Thanks for another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

Yes! I love your stories like this. Im already excited about it. Your definitely off to a great start. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what's next.

I know this is only the prologue, but I'm digging this so far. The dialogue in my opinion is quite engaging and fluent, and that's my favorite part of this story. Excellent dialogue and storytelling are great ways to keep the reader engaged, and you had me hooked. I'll be looking out for some more chapters in the future, so keep at it!