| Reviews for After the Dawn |
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   RandoFox chapter 10 . 7/27 This story wasn't the best quality and it felt very rushed but I still enjoyed it |
| HorsemanOTA chapter 10 . 6/30 This was a great ride, i loved how it all worked out and dawn is such a cutie lol, nice work on the stable time loop, i think you handled it pretty damn well. thanks for the read. Later Daze |
| Sakuto Narutouzumaki chapter 8 . 5/15 Nice..one.. Bwen forever |
| Spetsnaz Pinkie Pie chapter 10 . 2/13 love the story and god do I hate Kevin. he's a bitch |
| anthonymosca27 chapter 10 . 2/11 Sequel want to see sequel to The Story a new dawn. If not, thank you anyways. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/15 dawn reminds me of my little sister UwU i'm guessing she was inspired by one of your siblings? XD Author's reply: Thank you very much! I'm glad to know that Dawn reminded you of your sister :) Not really, because I only have two brothers that are over 10 years older than me XD My brother's wife's niece did inspire me a bit to write Dawn though :) |
| Aurora Nightstar chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 this was a great story and I would love to see a sequel or post credit scene. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/1/2019 This story is absolutely amazing. I was so immersed in the plot and felt the true genuine emotions. Admittedly whenever Ben, Gwen, or Kevin were talking, I heard Yuri Lowenthal, Ashley Johnson, and Greg Cipes. You are talented and I saw your art on Ben, Gwen and Dawn and the one with redhead Ken and half native American Devlin. I. Loved. It. Keep it up. Author's reply: Thank you very much! I'm incredibly flattered and your comment really means a lot to me. The art with Ben, Gwen and Dawn was made as a gift to me by an amazingly talented artist named Zilpa Eden (you can look for her profile on Deviantart) Thanks again! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2019 Love this 3000 Author's reply: Thank you very much! :) |
| Logic Soldier chapter 7 . 7/1/2019 I just notice something after rereading this story. Every single one of Ben's Villains and the whole Universes knows who Ben is and it has never been a Secret. It was only the people of Earth that didn't know who he was. Therefore his Family wouldn't be in anymore danger then they were before. Even his Human Villains knew who Ben was. Seems kind of pointless to try and protect them now and not before. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2019 Good! :) |
| Kevin be my life chapter 1 . 4/28/2019 Hi, friend. Have you watched the endgame movie? Author's reply: Yes, I did and I loved it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2019 I love you Author's reply: haha Thank you very much! I love you (and all of my readers) too! :) |
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/9/2019 The time travel aspect was what made the third Harry Potter film the best and this the best chapter |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2019 Some shippers move on. But not us. Not us. |
