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I've read way further than ch 1 on an app.

Lion wouldnt blame Max for his sisters death no one would think this guy killed my sister to get at him so it is his fault shes dead, they would think this guy killed my sister so it's this guys fault as an enemy origin it's not realistic but apart from that great story

WTF? That Jacob OC? His origins is fvcking stupid. No way in hell W’Kabi will adopt an outsider let alone the royal family and leave him unwatched especially when they keep losing vibraniums to Ulysses. And wtf is a cheetah realm not favoring good but also evil? . A stupid attempt to have a fast villain. It will never be like Flash vs Zoom.

Is his friend Shuri?

Please update this is such a amazing story it be a waste not to finish it

Update. Plz. I. Need. It.

Max and Odin can try looking through some knowledge of the Dark Elves Bor might've left behind. Also Max might be able to figure out that the Aether can't be destroyed. Odin is old enough to remember his father's reign, and can confirm that Bor would've destroyed the Aether rather than hid it, if the Aether could be destroyed.

ok so max has super powers doesn't use them..max has a suit which is useless..he is a genius..but always does stupid things...good going . next time lead with he is useless unless it's the climax ... writing not bad but it's does seems like u have compromised the story for increased length..if that make sense..all d best amigo..tc

I understand perfectly bro it's good to hear from you again I'm looking forward to seeing the next update

Now let’s be logical the entire reason of max’s Anger seems very weak to me he’s dying and didn’t tell him so what ? I under if he was upset or what ever but going to a new country with out telling his mom, then the reason for keeping the fact that he has powers he didn’t say anything to his parent even though tony told him about iron man plus they are his parents so why not tell them? and how do you allow a 13 year old to just get up and leave to go hang out with a grown man that you don’t know in another country ? And the biggest fault I find with the logic of this fic why has he not been exploring his powers ? He woke up with super speed he hasn’t been exploring it which 13 year old does that?

This fic has a good base but I think you should consicder tskjnf it down and do a full rewrite and make it more mature and believable logic wise even max coma bing in coma made no sense with his healing factor

you know i dont know what the point of this story, the fact that what happen here is the same as in the movie with the only difference is the extra character. also this max is the most nerfed speedster i ever read and the fact that this max suppose to be a genius and he cant used hes power properly its really pathetic. it would have been better if you didn't gave him power. im done with this shit.

great story, thanks ;) can't wait for more

For real this is getting worse by the chapter

Honestly, your mc is supposed to be smart so why tf is he acting so retarded, he's so fast, use the motherfucking speed to his advantage why is he not using his powers at all?!
I honestly can't read more of this trash if he doesn't learn how not to be full fucking retard every god damn fucking second of his pathetic life

That last sentence is terrible

More please