This was a touching story. Simply amazing with the feels. I loved it.

With one chapter you made an amazing story... fantastic job

By far one of the best past graduation roswell fanfics I've seen...possibly the best.

i realy like it

please update soon

:)

Wow! Just Wow. This storty was so well written and such a good read. I loved 'seeing' the Roswellians all grown up with careers and families. Thank you.

I loved it, wish it was choped up into different chapters, but that doesn't change the fact that it was a great story.

Wow! That was amazing! I loved it D I loved the way you added in bits from the series - the articles Tim found, the "Up north" lines..It was great D

I loved it! I've always wanted to read a story about max and zan finding each other. I'm really hoping you write a sequel

WOW! this story is great! The best part is where Liz has a flash of the happy future! I hope you write a sequal. Maybe something screws up the flash Liz got... ;-)I hope you will complete your started stories.

Aligewe

I love this story. I always wondered what happened to Zan. I love your version. Great story!

What a piece )

That was great!

I've been looking for a good 'what happened to Zan' fic and this is the one I've read, thanks!

Samantha

Aw... that was sweet. You might want to be careful of having too formal dialogue and having too many characters. Its hard to keep all those names straight.

I loved it though! It was a great story and I actually liked all the characters you introduced. You didn't make any of them too perfect or carbon copies of each other or the Roswell gang. There was a reason for every character.

Don't apologize for the background info. It made it believable when Liz got that teaching position. I also liked that you worked with what actually happened during the show. You didn't change anything.

Jon was a good villain. Pyscho, felt a little sorry for him, he was just misunderstood, and you acknowledged the melodrama.

Two things - try and include more of our Roswellians in there. Max and Liz were the only ones with real roles, but that's okay. It's better than having a story be too long to try and include everyone, but work to use subplots. Also, make it harder for Tim to figure everything out. I mean, in a day he figured out everything using search engines. It helped that he used "conspiracy nuts" web sites. That helped to make it more believable.

I look forward to reading more of your work and I hope my review will help you improve your writing.

Sincerely,

Charisma

Well crafted, well plotted, no loose ends. The characters work well together, the story is in sync with much of the other fic that is around, and it all ends so well. Nice!

BTW - I'm a grandfather, over 60, and I still thought it was good!

This was a really good story. I love future fics and you did a really good job resolving the Zan story line. Any chance of a sequel?