please update soon
10/10 keep up the great work

this makes no sense at all...wish it was more coherent plot

Hoew retarded are you IK am laughing on the floor. I have never seen such a retarded fanfic ever in my you or killing a few of my brain cells. Hahahahhahahaha

Yeah, Harry is probably a bigger asshole than James and Jack (really? Jack?) in this fic. "Hey look, my friends are quiet and sad because they're talking about how I'm dead. I'll just pretend they're right so I can 'surprise' them later.

Also, how is Hermione friends with several purebloods from Dark at worst and Neutral at worst houses? Also, I'm sorry, but Hermione isn't beautiful, it's honestly a pet peeve of mine when people pull that shit. Canon Hermione isn't Emma Watson, she's a girl that's plain looking at best but made ugly by her hair and teeth.

I love this story please keep writing chapters

Moldyshorts is DOOMED!

I'm sorry, but that Gringots powers check thing is some of the laziest bullshit I have ever seen. If you don't want us to know, don't put it in. If it is going to be revealed in a later chapter, put the power check later. If you want to reveal some binding or whatever, just have him ask for a magical check-up from the goblins. It is frustrating and lazy

Please update soon

Awesome chapter.

You could have told right their instead of saying will be revealed in later no one likes a clif hanger I se no reason you couldn't have told us what they were this chapter

It sounds like an interesting premise, but I really can't see myself reading it now. In the four years you've been posting, so far only the first-posted story of your nine is "Complete" after three years (and where that was the only story posting for its whole first year).

There hardly seems any point to wasting the time and effort to follow anything (continually rereading from the start for each posted chapter) or to suffer the angst of falling over each "terminal cliffie" during the "In(de)finite Hiatus" until they finally complete.

If I might offer one suggestion it would be to focus on your top one or two key stories at a time, while declaring all others (in their description text) to be on "Temporary Hiatus." The increased focus should improve your writing practice and completion rates considerably.

When's the next chapter it's always amazing to read this fanfic just pls keep on rolling. It's an inspiring story and a good writing style Too!

I love this story please keep writing chapters

I do read the AN's and the writing is yours as well as your plot this is your story this is your right to do whatever you please with it

I love this story please keep writing chapters