Glad to see this getting updated.

Anyway that was a ugly fight Winter and with Weiss over their father being dead.

There's a problem here. There's no logical reason for Jaune not to kill Winter here and now, as it's obvious he would be the victor. She's pretty evil and Weiss doesn't have any emotional attachment to her. Letting her go is a liability, yet another that a professional soldier and commander like Jaune was first introduced as shouldn't be letting go.

So I suppose I can appreciate the self-awareness you show here by noting how much it doesn’t make sense that Jaune is so powerful with so many accomplishments yet keeps getting kicked around like a rag doll for plot purposes, it’s just that doesn’t really fix the problem. It also doesn’t help that this ‘almighty OC god’ you’ve added gets to be holier than thou about it. It’s a bit of an odd move to be honest: having an annoying OC yell at the protagonist about his character’s inconsistencies.

On one hand a love this story but i also love The Struggles of Royalty
i was speechless when both got update. love your stories and keep it up my good sir

Yo, Love the story! The setting is really nice, and the way Jaune fought off that army of Grimm was well done. Keep it up, my friend. Hell yeah!

You know, I'm really glad this story is still going on, but it kind of gets old seeing Jaune nearly die every other chapter. For someone who's supposed to be one of the elite soldiers, he gets kicked around a lot.

An interesting chapter. I was amused by the bit at the end of the chapter. How come Weiss doesn't remember what happened? she was in a headlock, that isn't something you forget quickly right?

Thank you for the chapter. It was nice to see Blake here, as well as her realizing Pyrrha is probably having a difficult time right now.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Nice to see this was updated, I really like this story. I would recommend removing Pyrrha's tag and adding Yang and Blake's, as they, along with Weiss seem to be where this pairing is heading. I approve wholeheartedly of JxWBY by the way, I just think Pyrrha isn't relevant enough to be tagged here.

See you soon.

Ahem, sorry if i missed previous chapter, it was a very messy period. Aniway, gret job.

Interesting story.
Is there any reason why Blake, Yang, and Ruby have different names?

I'm glad Blake, Ruby, and Yang came to help. Though, Pyrrha probably won't be too keen on it.

Keep writing.

Thank you for the chapter. I guess Jaune won't catch a break for a while.

Wiess the stupid girl what was she doing jaune could have won if not for her dammit Wiess also I hope that jaune is slightly annoyed at Pyrrha who the hell sends and injured man to battle to assensally die?