"She plucked two cherry tomatoes from her salad and popped them into her mouth, rolling them around on her tongue suggestively and giving a soft moan." All that is left is for her to go rerorerorero.

Well, I must say that I really enjoy it despite the rushed ending, it was well worked at the end and I must thank you for finishing it. I hope your next creation is planed beforehand, I certainly enjoy your oneshots on pastebin but is also nice to read a longer production from you.

May those two find great happiness together. I look forward to the one-shot, I am guessing it might be about how Lincoln and Leni eventually have Liena. I just look forward to any other future projects of yours in general.

It was a great story.

Well done!

I'm glad to see this fic come to an end finally. I remember when I saw the predecessor to this after it was uploaded a few hours prior and thought I'll give this a shot. I liked the premise and gave it a follow. Imagine the surprise when it got updated just a few days later. And even after it ended you kept coming out with more stories and chapters relatively quickly and I felt like you were going to make a big mark in the fandom right out of the gate.
I followed your tumblr and watched you show how creative you were through your art and writings, which left me a little inspired. Then I remember last year when you had trouble with this during the 5th chapter and you put writing on the site to the side for a bit. I still loved seeing your drawings and one shots here and there. It's been a long time since I started following, but I'm happy you came back to this and finished it.
I hope you can keep the fire going and tell more of your story ideas, hopefully that lisacoln idea I remember you talking about last year, and hope you enjoy it. Or if you prefer to just do your drawings and a few small fics on pastebin, then I wish you luck in keeping that creative spark going as you seem to be really inspired by the loud house. I hope to find something that inspires me enough to get back to my craft one day.

Aww I'm happy for Leni expect I don't like it when the drunk men tried to hurt Leni

Glad I got to see the end after so long, great job! I’m looking forward to the epilogue and next story.

Follow up story? Yes!

I'd say you did quite well here, despite your feelings on it. It was certainly worth the wait, for sure.

You sure came back tot his with a resolution! The epilogue should be just as good!

Finally! I'm happy this got a ending!

Unless your sack gets shot with a tranq dart that, in other words, rewrites your sperm by your hyper intelligent younger sister

First off, loving this story. I like how you portray Leni, a ditz, but smarter than people give her credit for. In a way, I kind of see her as the Drax of the Loud House, in the way that his people don't understand sarcasm or euphamisms.

Second, and I'm sure others have said this in the comments. I'm sorry, but that scene where you had LIsa shoot her brother in the nuts, with a dart gun, that was brutal. And unfortuantely i can completely see Lisa doing something like that.

But dude that made me cringe, you had me feeling that! Ugh!

And yeah, to your point on incest, it's a cartoon show, and this is fanfiction, ANYTHING GOES! More or less.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

This story is fantastic please post soon

Ouch talk about a headshot. I mean that was a real low blow from Lisa. Like seriously I heard of the nutcracker but not the nutblaster.