Aww I love this! Great job!

OHMY GOODNESS THIS WAS SO GOOD! and the other ninja think they've been through a lot.

i love how how fit events from the cannon story into this. it's amazing how you do it. I love this story so much Zane and Echo are my favorites because they are so innocent but this takes it to a whole new level. Borg, Pixal, Julien, Zane and Echo deserve better lives. Ganki and Jane do too. But Samukai and Christopher are in for a world of pain.

NO NO NO NO NO.

HOW DARE YOU POTENTIALLY MAKE ZANE THINK THAT.

Still love the story though. :3

NO. NO. WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?

Can I punch Christopher in the face? I want to punch him in the face.

Dr. Julien and Zane are super adorable. And I think I may know what Julien's designing. ;3

I LOVE IT. IT'S SUPER CUTE.

And I really like that idea of Julien making Zane small/more like a child at first, and making bigger bodies as he 'grows'. (Kinda like the movie Robots. :3)

A wild ride to the end. I'm now curious on Shadows! This is really amazing. The things Zane went through though... I'm surprised how normal he remained after the whole thing.

This story is amazing!

kinda short on time so can't make large comment, sorry

This was thrilling!
Also, Ganki must be avenged!

Alright. Going from hating Christopher to loathing. The man deserves a fate worse than death.

This is the most awesome fanfic involving echo zane since I read Empty Echoes and Crooked Clockwork by Toni42.

this is a really cool story. I like how it's not all move baste. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I just wanted to let you know that I love this story so much! I like to imagine a world where Zane and Echo are adorable sibilings. Its perfect really. Zane is a great big brother.
I can't wait to read more. Thank you for this awesome story! I'll probably draw some little Zane and Echo brotherly art. :3

Hghsksi! This is getting good!