Wow I have no words for how awesome this story has been so far. I cannot wait for the next chapter

Ohmyloki, I have been waiting for this for so long but it was sooo worth it. Tony and Peter finally figured it out. Whatever 'it' may be. At least they made a deal XD
And poor Ned. I love that boy so much and seeing him so anxious and worried for his best friend made my heart hurting. Poor Neddyboy T-T
I can't wait to find out what you've planned for us in the next chapter! You make me so curious! *bangs head on table in frustration* I need to know what will happen!
Keep up the good work and stay healthy and safe!
Xx

WOW. i don’t think i’ve ever cried during a fanfic so kudos to you. i can’t wait until u continue this bc i need peter to get help! and he’s not even real!

I didn't want to read the second part to All the Lonely People because I knew it was going to be a shitshow. So I'll post my comment for both chapters right here. BTW I couldn't post this on chapter 22 so I'm doing it for chapter 18.

Chapter 21
You really threw me in for a loop RayRox360. You really did. I thought Tony was gonna screw up, but it was actually Peter who did. Tony really tried to fix things and I thought he was gonna yell and lose his cool and say some things that would worsen the situation, but he didn't. Peter, my poor precious baby Parker, is such a mess right now. Everything is such a mess. So now I'm a puddle of tears and snot and I don't have a mop with me so I guess I'll just wallow in my filth.

Chapter 22
The dream really scared me because it felt so real. I'm sure that we've all had those freaky dreams that start contorting reality and you have absolutely no idea whether you are really dreaming or not. I felt Peter's pain and his confusion and his fear. This is probably one of your best chapters in this story. Most people rush right into making amends between the characters after a huge fight, but this one progressed pretty realistically. I was so happy when Tony made that deal with Peter and I'm ready for the showdown between Tony and Richard(at least that's one of my predictions). And Peter FINALLY met Steve and boy oh boy am I excited for that! As far as my predictions go, I'm predicting that Peter chews out Steve in the next chapter, but whether Steve accepts the criticism or fights back I have no idea. My other guess is that Peter will be tortured so badly that Tony will head down to Parker residence and just ever so vaguely threaten Richard. Because if he confronts him directly, Peter will be in literal hell. I feel like Richard might find out about Spiderman but I'm keeping my fingers crossed that it doesn't happen. Also, I'm totally expecting summer vacation on Stark Tower and a bunch of fluffy moments and I've already gotten my hopes up so I really hope that Richard doesn't put a damper on them. And I swear I was thinking through that narration with the different characters that "this is exactly like a movie" and it was really well done. And congrats on your longest chapter!

Why would you live somewhere that has a hurricane season?!

Tony and Peter may have super-powers, but Danny is the real hero in this scene. Characters that embody a ‘conscious‘ are so complicated to contrive, but you did so wonderfully with Danny. Excellent writing, as always, and truly believable character arcs. Very well done. Cannot wait for Part II!

End of part 1!? Longest chapter yet!? The title actually said in the story as well as both stories finally coming together with Peter meeting Cap!? I’m gonna faint! An absolutely amazing chapter - showing us the pain Peter has felt, from the rogues to the reuniting of Peter and Tony. And now MJ knows Peter’s secret!? Honestly, if you’re not striving to be a writer of some sort, your in the wrong career. Or art, for your drawings on Instagram are amazing as well.

I cannot wait for the next chapter, and will be checking almost every single day until then :)

“holy shit is she already glaring at us? We aren’t even inside yet!” lol mood

You are so good at writing, I have no clue how you do it XD the detail, the amount of thought that you put into the plot, and the way you write the characters is all so amazing! And I didn’t even know it was possible for someone to write so much and so well in only a few weeks :0

Wow, you really put Peter and Tony through the wringer! I guess that would upset Tony. He cares about the kid more than he expected. I am glad they talked and they are going to trust each other. Tony wants Pete to spend the summer with him. I like how Tony even said good things about Cap. He misses his friends. Glad Danny ended up giving Pete a reality check..
As for the Rogues, I am hoping that they will be able to come back. I am now wondering what is going to happen with Pete and the Rogues. Who were the Rogues fighting? I am guessing that the Rogues coming back will happen in the final "book."
I hope that Richard, the Cons and Ross will get put into their place. I want them caught. I know that Tony will be shocked when he learns of what Richard has done to Pete. Richard Parker makes Howard Stark look like a saint! LMBO...
Keep up the good work! I am enjoying each new chapter. I hope that Pep, Rhodey and Happy will understand and forgive Tony. The same for Ned and MJ forgiving Pete. They know this happens sometimes. But something good did come from this... Way to strike up a deal, Tony! No wonder I love that man!

Aaaaaxw this was awesome ! The ending is so sweet thank you for the update

Not gonna lie, I cried multiple times. I was so worried about how Tony would react, because he definitely wouldn’t have welcomed Peter back with open arms and oh gosh he didn’t! But it was so moving and... idk heartwarming? Empowering? Refreshing? I can’t name of the emotion, but it was there watching Peter stand his ground and empathize with Tony. I’ve said it once and I’ll say it again, you are an excellent author. You capture each character as if I was watching an actual movie! I absolutely loved it! I can’t see what part two will hold for everyone - or should I say “phase two” hahah.

WTF IS THIS
BISHHHHH THAT CLIFFHANGER WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD? ISTG ISTG I HAD SUCH A BAD LAST COUPLE OF DAYS I JUST WANTED TO LEGIT DIE AND JUST GIVE UP BUT YOUR FIC MAKES ME SO HAPPY AND EXCITED TO READ AND GOD I JUST CANT FREAKINF EXPRESS HOW MUCH YOU AMAZE ME AND ILL SAY IT AGAIN THAT THIS WAS NO JOKE PROBABLY THE BEST FIC I HAVE EVER READ. I LOVE EVERYTHINF ABOUT YOU, HOW YOU MAKE ALL YOUR READERS LAUGH AND CRY AND HOW YOU ALWAYS REPLY TO US BECAUSE YOU ARE SO AMAZING AND DEVOTED. DEAR LORD I FEEL LIKE EVERYONE HAS ALREADY SAID THIS BUT PLEASE GET ON WITH PART 2 BECAUSE YOUR WRITING ALWAYS MAKES MY DAY SO MUCH BETTER

This story is fantastic. Not gonna lie, I'm looking forward to some more fluff and Peter having someone in his corner. Hope all is well with you. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I quite like the cliffhanger. it still manages to keep part 1 as a cohesive unit, which might not always be achieved