Interesting chapter

You know for some reason I just can't imagine Margaery crying over Tommen of all people lol she just seems way too manipulative for that kind of reaction. The only one that I believe she would truly do everything for would be her grandmother...

Well, you took your bloody time.

Update!

I'll be honest, this story isn't that great and everything feels really rushed to me but I still enjoy reading it.

When I was reading through the story to where I am now I really liked the idea of a new Baratheon brother. It is definitely an interesting idea for a story. I really like this story so far.

So based on what I’ve read so far there are a couple of usess of wrong writing such as, I can understand which it could be this is a misunderstanding or I can explain. There is also a part in this chapter where the slave master who sellers the unsulied called a daemon a she. Just little inconsistencys here and there.

Enjoyed the chapter

Nice that we know which Golden Company members are getting which lands

Very happy that Jon is open to the idea of bending the knee to Daeron also hope when they meet it’s quickly cleared up that Sansa isn’t a prisoner but actually the woman who’ll be Daerons Queen

Good chapter, it'll be amusing when Jon and Arya realize that Sansa doesn't need 'saving' lol anyway thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one.

Arya should return soon to take her revenge on the Frey’s.

Tyrion has some nerve to be losing faith in Daeron when so far he's been nothing but understanding towards Tyrion when what he should've done is annihilate all people with sympathy towards the Lannisters from his circle.

isnt the 500000 newly freed save would cause chaos?

Loved the chapter

Nice to see Daeron being a effective king even with the state he was really in so really glad we got that bit with Sansa there at the end

At least with how Tommen and Cersei where dealt with no one can compare Daeron to Robert especially if Daeron executes the ones who killed them

Looking forward to seeing Daeron get the last two regions back under his control and hope you update soon

Feels like a lifetime has passed since the last chapter. But it was with it.

Oof, that was a tough thing to read, thankfully you didn't dwell on it. Tommen dying was sad, but Cersei had to die, otherwise, the realm would have been forever in turmoil.

And it's good to finally see Daeron and Sansa reciprocate their feelings. They really are seeming to be similar in a lot of ways, by using the losses of their families into being stronger. Though, in Sansa's case she's not the last Stark, there's still Jon, Arya and Bran, but again, I feel the similarities are almost parallel to each other. Thanks again for another chapter!