This is a really good and interesting story! I hope you update soon because i got really sucked into it!

I really enjoyed this one, and you are absolutely right. The world really does need more kid Dakota! I really enjoy your stories where Dakota is sick, tired, upset, or as a child! I would especially love to see some more sick ones where Dakota is very ill.

Are you going to continue this?
I hope you do.

Aww I love this so much. Cavendish and Dakota are two of my favourite characters and their friendship is one of my favourites too. You did such a good job with them :D

Very sweet. I like the subtle references to Island of Lost Dakotas.

interesting read. i really love your cavendish/dakota stories. they're really good.