The ending was unexpected, but touched me. Don't want to sound like a sap, but it did.
Also just a minor nitpick, you spelled Mitsuru's name wrong.

I just realize the genre was there all the time and I didn't notice it before I read the whole fic... Whatever, I like it though.
Thanks for translating u
Attn. Kiriha-chan

Incredible story, the ending was sad but beautiful. I want to read more about this couple.

That was great! I don't know how was the original, but here the poetic style is totally there. And, it works so well. It surprised me, because until now I thought that result of mixing poetic with sex scenes can only be cringe-worthy. And you made it so beautiful and full of interesting and fitting metaphors.
Also, seeing that this fic is a bit older - it seems your take found a bit of confirmation in the last episode :) - Kokoro and Mitsuru are becoming a thing / problem, just as you wrote.

thanks for writing about these two, I love them so much. The ending killed me but Im still happy

Even if my heart is broken I'm happy there is at least one Mitsuru/Kokoro fanfic thank you!

Welp just found out this one had a second chapter...

It broke my heart!

Honestly, I'm so happy of reading a fic of these two! Thank you it was super good!