Haha so true! Mixing of books is binding! Loved this story! Thank you for writing and for sharing!

Very nice story. These days I’ve listened to the Lizzie Bennet audiobook so I feel I’m back in the Lizzie Benne world and this story is a great alternative to the canon. I like it :D

lovely :)

Humorous sweet and smart

Thank you for another enjoyable story! I really loved that Lydia didn't fall for Wickham this time. I laughed aloud when she instead kneed him in the balls. Perfect!

Great plot. Great delivery. I'm speachless. Your prose is entertaining and catching. Thank you for the great fiction

Great story. I liked the ending where they move in together. I'm not a big fan of marriage so I tend to cringe a little bit when stories always have the happy ending by a wedding.

The only suggestion is that it was a little confusing weather Darcy and Bing lived in LA or San Fran. I thought in the diaries that they were both in San Fran and then you made it sound like they went home to LA and then Darcy and Fitz took a business trip to San Fran. But at the end when Lizzie talks about how most of her stuffs already moved in, she practically lived there, they are still in San Fran. Darcy also makes a comment that he's lived there all his life but she makes it feel like home. I would just try to make it a bit more clear where everyone lives primarily and what city the business are in. Otherwise great story.

What a great story. You took one little almost throwaway line and made a great new story out of it. Well done.

I laughed for several minutes at that line about mixing the books. Maybe I should go to bed...

This was so precious and sweet my heart hurt from feels overload by the end.

Oh, yes, the mixing of the books. I love how that just sort of happened.

Brilliant episode. Good thing Fitz tipped Gigi off.

Wow! Very cute story I enjoyed it very much!

This was really sweet. Thank you.

Great story!