Aaaah now I need to see Double Trouble! Eep up the great work :)

This is an amazing story. There is so much hard work and effort into it, it makes me want to cry. I don’t know if you have finished or not but if you have or haven’t please continue ( only if you really want to), you have such talent and you made me laugh, want to cry, and gasp out loud. Amazing, amazing, amazing! ( plus it is so hard to find Lloyd stories, so you totally get me in every way).

I cry tears of joy*
- dude this is awsome

I seriously love how you always, consistently, manage to make Lloyd's childhood so much worse in perspective with every chapter. Like, a kid living alone in the streets that young... it's a wonder how he survived with relative good health. He takes his city misadventures more as 'another Tuesday' while his bros have their lives, also consistently, shortened from stress and horror. 14 chapters and they cannot catch a break and I dunno if it's me but it's always hillarious to see Lloyd unknowingly push all their buttons.

This hindsight horror will probably hit Lloyd in the future.

I am in the firm belief that that needle was a sewing needle. Totally, legit citizen sewing in the middle of the street...yeah.

Oh my goodness I love your writing and this story! The Ninja are amazing and I love Kai and Lloyd and all of them so much. You write them all really well! Fantastic! Exceptional! So great!

That was the sweetest thing I’ve ever read

Well wasn't this just sugar and spice and all things nice! :D

Yeah Lloyd did seem to recover a little *too* quickly from his illness...

But I'm glad he's FINALLY being taught some sense of self-care. After living on the streets for so long he's never had anyone to worry over him...until now, so it's hard to break old habits I guess.
i also like that he's getting more attention from the other ninja and not just Kai and Nya :P however Jay doesn't seem to have much interaction with him yet..unless I'm forgetting stuff from previous chapters..

And it's interesting to explore the mind of someone who has never known what it means to have a family, even if that means just one parent, it's a lot more obstacles to overcome in comparison to those who did grow up with one, it's taken for granted I suppose when you realise how much there is to learn about having one in the first place.

As for Dareth..to be fair you make some good arguments for him! Like that he never questions anything and just accepts what happens xD but...I still just can't like him enough in the show D: I swear he only hangs around the ninja for the social status/association with them.

Also.. I'm such a sucker for Cole hugs xD I've noticed a lot that people think Cole gives the best hugs...and I'll bet he "does!". I want one ;-;

In conclusion: lovely chapter :D friggin long as usual xD but all the more lovely to read!
xxx

This is BEAUTIFUL! I don't know how I could've missed this. Your characterization is spot on and I can really feel the emotion! I also love how you included Lloyd's pronunciation of dragon as 'dregon'

the wait was worth it sis, the chapter was every bit as amazing and satisfying as i expected it to be. always blown away by your writing! hope you’re staying safe & healthy xoxo

Sorry guys, but Dareth's definitely going to need a lot more floors.
And oh my, that last part... I died! That was sooo good and emotional. It was perfect! If you ever stop writing this, I'm gonna kill you, bring you back to life, and 'convince' you to write more. Because this fic is 100% beauty. I totally love it UwU
Keep up the good work and stay healthy and safe!
Xx

Well great. Now my heart has melted all over the floor because of this absolute adoribleness (pardon my spelling) yet endlessly angsty chapter. I hope your happy. You have no idea how long it takes to clean the melted heart of my carpet.

I love this and I love you 3 if you ever stopped writing this, I think I'd die
I'm so happy you posted and this was beautiful! I was laughing so much if I wasn't close to tears. I can't wait to read more! Questions, actually - do you plan to do all the series (and make some points slightly better)? because if so OMFG YES
Either way I loved this and can't wait for more, but PLEASE take care of yourself!
P.S. Dareth was great, he had so much more character and reminded me 'pretty penny tavern' from AO3, you did great!

oh man, this was awesome. the end was hilarious. I can just picture the boys' faces. hilarious.

Oh my gosh X'D this is just so, so, so... I don't have words! Gut-wrenching, hilarious, heartbreaking, sweet, ALL THE THINGS.

Dang. I love your work. And I think this is my favorite chapter to date.

oh my god.
there is so much here I love!
okay
do have one question, Lloyd having sharp teeth is that all of his teeth are pointed?
also congratulations on making me actually like Dareth. I care about him now.
also this is probably just a weird coincidence, but I've actually started to fall back into the Ninjago fandom again,and so for the past few days I've actually been rereading chapters of Raising Hell.
and I was actually listening to the Weekend whip for the first time in quite a while yesterday
also I almost cried at Lloyd being small sad child