| Reviews for Path of Grace |
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Stormhound12 chapter 1 . 6/19 The only thing is that feminism doesn't really have anything to do with women being upset with males. feminism is seeking equal treatment under the law and economically, basically the same treatment within society. I get that man hating and whatever can go hand in hand with it, but I think it's a mistake to assume they are mutually inclusive because then it turns feminism into something more like a war rather than a social movement to better women's lives. What does mistaking izumi for grabbing onto him have to do with being male? Like I guess you're shooting for a comedic bit playing off of the stereotype that males are dumb, but this doesn't make any sense to me. Anyways, your story is still pretty good. The idea is neat and not overdone (I don't think), so good job. Kudos and keep on writing! |
bajy chapter 7 . 11/21/2019 love it! will there be more chapters soon? |
R3QLESS chapter 7 . 9/8/2019 This is a great story I love the character development you made between Bakugo and Izumi, there’s room for even more development and I’m very curious to see where it will lead. |
amerdism chapter 7 . 7/14/2019 Awesome story. I hope to see more soon. When’s the next chapter going up? I like how smart and strong Izumi is, but what’s happening with one for all? I hope all might passes it onto Izumi still. The whole geisha thing is pretty nice touch and how Izumi constantly speaks her mind is hilarious. |
cloudpanda961 chapter 6 . 5/23/2019 i enjoy your story and hope you keep making em. this is real good keep it up. i hope you overcome your writers block. why not make kacchan more emotionally open to izumi after this? i wanna see kacchan face when he saw what he did to izumi and the repercussions about his actions. make him feel more regret about being reckless so that he makes an effort to control himself. i wanna see him cry and beg forgiveness. after that why not make him more protective about her? similar story if i remember is midoriya the rabbit. |
lovleydragonfly chapter 7 . 3/3/2019 Oof |
wildtrance chapter 7 . 2/27/2019 … you two need to talk with a therapist about this. It’s festered for years. Lance that shit and flush out the abscess. |
Lord Anubis Judge of the dead chapter 7 . 2/26/2019 Whoa. This has some good tension and build up happening. Great work. |
fan girl 666 chapter 7 . 2/25/2019 I was seriously not expecting that big emotional flashback but holy crap it was amazing |
Queerdonkey01 chapter 7 . 2/24/2019 Great new chapter! I like the spin you did here regarding their past with each other. It gave a lot of insight on how they turned out having their friendship the way it is now. It’s pretty complicated but healthier than in cannon. Good job! I think the fighting scenes were pretty good too. I like how you added that he was horrified by Izumi having her arm messed up by him. It’s a nice touch. Writers block can suck and I’m glad you pulled though! I can’t wait until the next update! You version on a female Deku is my favorite and I can’t get enough of her! |
Dementra chapter 7 . 2/24/2019 This really doesn't make sense. You've already established that Katsuki and Izumi spar on regular basis with both of them having near equal number of wins and that they are rival/friends. And considering they were sparring in the Den, I'm assuming that Quirks are allowed. So why are they having such personal problems here? It's like you're just trying to force your Katsuki and Izumi into canon Bakugo and canon Midoriya's story and roles. It makes them OOC, not from the canon characters but from your established fanfic characters. |
fan girl 666 chapter 6 . 10/31/2018 if Bakugo thinks that chocolate is ever gonna be used as anything other then a sweet treat then he has a lot to learn as does Aizawa when he realizes that he's been overthrown as the ruler of 1-A in favour of it's new queen also I was able to pick out characters from Eyeshield 21 and Get Backers bother personal favourites of mine even if one was never finished completely |
wildtrance chapter 6 . 10/22/2018 They are adorable. I love this fic. Why can't we have more stories like it? I wanna see the fight between K and C. I really wanna see that fight. The subtle Assisnation Classroom Xover slays me. I love it. |
Queerdonkey01 chapter 6 . 10/22/2018 Hi again! Sorry about not commenting sooner, college keeps me busy. And don’t worry about when you update, we can understand that there are other things going on in writers lives. I read the latest chapter when you posted it I just hadn’t gotten around to commenting yet, my bad I’ll try to comment faster next time. So this review is going to be pretty short. Izumi is definitely impressing her classmates now and I’m happy for her. That little bit of her history that you gave us made me appreciate her more. She’s unstoppable. And I’ll bet Yaoyorozu is in for a beat down when Bakugou and Izumi are done with their fight! God I don’t know which one to look forward to more! I’m not surprised that Mineta did that to be honest. It’s a good thing that when Izumi’s plan backfired, Bakugou was there to save her. And the boys even looking away when she undressed was a cute touch. And Todoroki is finally going to be added to the mix! Can’t wait to see what you have planned for us! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2018 as soon as you made Izuku a feminist it ruined the story, don't fucking bring politics and shit into fanfiction, this is now most likely going to end up like that dumpster fire of a Feminist agenda story that started out pretty good in the Dxd/P5 crossovers |