| Reviews for A Better? Fifth Year |
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   Millie072 chapter 10 . 7/18 Was Sirius cleared? Otherwise he shouldn't be at platform 9&3/4 openly. Hermione basically has no social manners at all. Her actions toward Luna are outright rude. Sure it's canon, but still. Are Tony & Loki going to stay in London during the school year? |
| Millie072 chapter 9 . 7/18 Ron's a good friend? Up till 4th year maybe. There is no understanding why Harry accepted Ron's comments after the first task; it certainly wasn't an apology. Quite enjoying "Fifth Year". Where is Tony? As protective as he & Loki are, one of them would be with Harry at Grimmauld no matter who else is there. He let both Ron & Hermione off easy. Other than no contact, why wasn't said about holding Hedwig captive? |
| Millie072 chapter 4 . 7/18 Having everyone fly across London is one of the supremely stupid ideas JKR came up with. With Harry's noteriarity why didn't they apparate or use a portkey? |
| Vampireking40 chapter 1 . 6/4 Who exactly is Eric and when did he join the story. Harry should have gone back to America and the Toad would not have been able to track him down. I still don't get how the Toad found his location to send her Demetnors after the boy. |
| Prince Anakin Loptr chapter 30 . 5/4 Hi I still have to ask, do you follow the story line when it goes with snape? Because if snape die i gonna hate you no serious please dont let snape die i like him. Then i like youre story i think you do this very good. i like to read more from you. Lordloptr |
| Faith Sparks chapter 30 . 3/24 This is great. I love it. |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 30 . 12/27/2019 LOVE IT! |
| mythrica chapter 21 . 12/18/2019 I don't normally write negative reviews, but have to ask why are you just reciting the books, with a little insert here and there which have no material value to the story and calling it a cross over. The entire purpose of a crossover is to show how the blending changes things. Not to show no difference. Loki's a god you got him weak as any wizard. You got the family not interfering so you can "canon" the whole story defeating the purpose again of a crossover fiction. So far this story is 90% JK's work. |
| DrowningShip chapter 30 . 10/23/2019 I NEED MORE. I HAVE READ SINCE THE FIRST PART AND I NEEED MORE PLEASE I BEG YOU I NEED IT |
| Kushka chapter 30 . 9/13/2019 Great story |
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 30 . 8/4/2019 I loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it. |
| inuyasha16451 chapter 30 . 8/2/2019 Omg that was awesome |
| geekymom chapter 30 . 7/30/2019 Fabulous chapter! |
| Navyangel85 chapter 30 . 7/29/2019 Ooooooo ioooooo what |
| Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 30 . 7/29/2019 Loved it |
