I know this is probably the last thing on your mind, but an update/completion of this story would be nice. While you may think it's gone cliche or melodramatic, it still has potential to be a fulfilling tale. I hope you return to it soon.

Please update !

Revia -whine- you need to update. It's been...not quite as long as other writers but too long indeed! Just was re-reading your fic for the billionth time and decided to let you know that your fans are still loyally waiting for you to update again! You rock Revia!

Revia...-whine- It's been forever since you last updated. I keep reading and re-reading this fic over and over again and everytime I do I keep wanting an update. x.x This is so good. Just wanted to let you know we're still here for you! So update soon, okay?

Gah! Why did you do that? Update! Please? That was really good. I hope you update soon, else I go insane. Well, that was delicious. Thanks for the wonderful ficcers!

wow. I *heart* this story so much. You really have alot of potential as a writer and seem to be improving with each chaper! Excellent job characterizing Chris, in particular. The girl Anna really adds a cool twist to things and makes you want to read more. I like how you drop hints about her past/motives, but never reveal it all. It keeps it cryptic and exciting. Keep up the awesome work!:D

I just ADORE Borus/Chris pairings! So you finally posted this update at long last ;) I'm so glad. I've been waiting and waiting for my favourite Borus/Chris stories to be updated and finally my long wait was over when I saw that you had updated this... but then now I'll be in agony until your NEXT chapter comes out, I guess. Keep up the good work!

P.S. Please don't let Chris be rescued easily. Just a passing thought. I hope you can give an insight to what the characters are feeling as well as you do what they are thinking.

...Much as I am enjoying the ride, erm, the plot holes are rather glaring, don't you think? :shrugs: Ah well, of course, it is your story, to tell as you wish. If I want to tell a story, write my own fic, eh? :smile: Never mind. You keep on with you idiom- don't mind us'n crazy old folks in the corner natterin' on about 'cannon.' We're all nuts, anyhow. :grin:

Keep up the good work!

-Cat

Well written, and with potential, although... Erm... You kinda have a _glaring_ plothole, there. I mean, Chris bears the true Water rune. With all of it's curative properties. As soon as she was concious, (If you don't subscribe to the awareness of the Runes theory, that is- it could have done it the moment it realized it's bearer was in danger...) Chris could have invoked the rune. I really don't believe in anything- short of another true rune- that could resist- certainly not a poison. :shrug:

But it is your story, so let me not spend huge amounts of time pointing out plot-holes that you are probably perfectly cognisant of anyhow. It's good fun, and in good fun. I'll just enjoy it as far as it goes, eh? :grin:

Keep up the hard work!

-Cat

Yes! And update! You wouldn't *believe* how thrilled I was to see 'Deception' at the top of the list of updated stories!

I really like this chapter. The plot is thickening, and I am so curious to find out what happens next. I know you didn't like this chapter, but I loved it. You write Borus so well.

I was having a rather rough day. Getting to read this really cheered me up, so thanks for that! I hope you update soon. I'll try to do the same. Maybe we can keep each other going.

Good luck!

Thanks for reviewing! Great chapter. I like the suspense, you draw it out so that I can hardly wait to find out what happens next.

Yay! I'm so glad you updated. _ I had almost lost hope. Please, keep it up! There aren't enough BorusxChris stories out there, and I'm dying for them, lol.

Please don't abandon this story! What's going to happen to Chris? Will Borus be able to help her?

um... Chris OOC?

sorry~ i'm kinda picky on that fact

it's the only thing that irritates me beyond anything~

but,

i still wish you luck on this

Oh, you updated! I'm probably very, very late in reviewing this but here goes anyway:
It was great! I loved it, I wish they had talked a little more but them kissing was a nice scene to put in. Very sweet and tastefully written. Reading this makes me wish there really was more romantic interaction in the game. Well, what are fanfics for? ) Good job! I enjoyed it.