Hi! I just found this story and oh my gosh, I love it! It's more realistic than a lot of other PJO fanfics I've read because it doesn't make him out to be some OP undefeatable dude. Everyone is defeatable and I like that this story acknowledges that.

I know that this may not be updated again but I'll stick around just in case because this story has so much potential! Also, please don't take what the haters say to heart. I've seen a few of the nasty comments left by some people and they aren't right. Most are probably just upset that it's not going the way they want it to. Anyways, I love your story and your writing style. I also really like the direction this is going in because it's different to other fanfics which makes me feel like I'm not reading the same thing over and over again but written by different authors.

Kudos!

This was good until it was shit. Honestly, you made Perseus seem decently talented and yet he quickly got his ass kicked. I stopped reading when he was knocked unconscious because it was so pathetic

Only one thing, prometheus is the titan of foresight its why he wasn't imprisoned in the titan war because he fought on the gods side.

Don't tell me you're seriously gonna have him betray the Titans...because that will seriously completely ruin this fic. Please.

Well shit, that bit about him killing his supposed mom added some fukin weight

Good thing you're back to updating, anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait until he regains his strength and can go back to leading the Titan Army.

Ay, obv not a big problem but when their duel was first gathering attention and etc. You said the virgin goddess and the centaur were coming or something.

Anyway, thanks for the update fam

Percy is the son of Kronos. Atlas is the son of Iapetus, who is Kronos' brother, so Atlas wouldn't be Percy's uncle (as said by Percy) he would be his cousin.

I love this! I’m excited for when the camp finds out that Percy is Kronos’ son.

I hope you're not making the mistake of keeping him in the camp just to follow canon because that would be awfully cliche as hell.

fabulous! xD

Very interesting, I look forward to the next chapter...

Love the story so far, and you really have put a great amount of work into this! This can be a fantastic story, so don't give it up. Have a great day and night!

Not bad, I'll follow this for now. Just wanted to say, Atlas is the son of Iapetus, and nephew of Kronos. Therefore, in this story Perseus and Atlas are cousins, so Perseus calling Atlas 'Uncle', would be wrong.

Nice first chapter but please and i say that cause i don,t want this story to become boring as fuck do not rush it try to bring depth to percy character do not make him op better that most demi god his age but not overhelming powerful do not make him powerful enought to destroy gods or godness before he is an adult and do it carefully he may be the son of Kronos but he no titan or olympian are extremely powerful way more powerful thant the titan at the moment and way more powerful than when they overthrowed them Zeus ,Poseidon and Hades could very easily destroy Kronos once more after he reformed even in his Titan body he would be weak just like Atlas and the other we saw it in PJO Percy fought Hyperion and was able to extinguis his fire wich if he was at full power would have not work I mean Percy was able to fight Kronos and he was farm to be super powerful at the time a god like zeus would completely destroy Kronos or any titan in 1v1 even atlas had problems not a lot but some to fight artemis when she was weak and she is far from being the most powerful Olympian of the new generation wich are Apollo ,ares and athena .I just say that cause I saw a lot of Pjo story go down like that and yours is really goods I mean if you rush it or make Percy too op it won't be long before writing will become boring to you most of the story where the MC is op or super strong and on hiatus cause of that