Nice story! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Only to chapter 4. All I can say is, this is incredibly well written, and stays extremely true to the characters.
Gotta love Morgana being the truest bro too. Lol

I'm loving this story. Not a fan of Persona 4 though, but still enjoying it nonetheless. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Despite chapter 16 taking longer than you said, I still believe the wait will be worth it. Hopefully you can help me through this quarantine Boredom.

Very nicely paced for the thriller/supernatural drama that is Persona 5. I do however have one question. How did Haru go unresponsive and body shutting down to sitting up and talking?

You can't party Ornstein or Enough though... Honestly if there was any boss to reference, it should've been Orphan of Kos from Bloodborne, or Defiled Amygdala, they would've been a lot more impressive than the dude that you can make your bitch just by getting day Bass Cannon (Chaos Zwei if you haven't seen OnlyAfro's hit YouTube video, "He's Back"). Orphan of Kos can also be parried, and would fit a lot better for the bit you were going for there.

Haru x Makoto huh. I see you've also read "Joker's Test of Endurance," by Kinkymation

No need to be sorry! I have been waiting for forever! Lol! Glad to see this chapter came out pretty well!

I love this story alot cause its the longest one about my 3rd fav ship of all time, only Hinny and Nalu surpass it.

Thank you for continuing this story, as long as it did take. I really do enjoy reading it. As for the addition of Kasumi I enjoy seeing her but I think visiting Royal and making little tweaks would be a good idea. Keep up the good work and have fun with Persona 5 Royal

Thank you for this beautiful work of art you have created. This has keep my entertained in these dark times. Perhaps p5r will be of inspiration to you as it is now out? Hope to see ch: 15 soon. Have a great day!

-Gooser

Ahh! Such a good chapter! Why must you put us on such a cliffhanger!

Wow man a sex scene in one chapter then a fight scene in the next? You spoil us!

When akechi arrived, I thought it was a dream. It wasn’t. And I was so shocked by that. Not only am I excited for the next one, I’m also fearful. I actually started to well up a bit when Haru was struck down. Once again amazing read and am super excited for 15!

Hello i know I'm just a guest reviewer but I still want to say this. This story(read:fanfic) was honestly one of the best ones I have ever had the joy of reading it had a good balance of fluff and angst *note there was only small pockets of that though* and it included my fave P5 pairing.

Now I remember in one of the chapters, i need to check which one, Futaba said that she couldn't think of a song for her and Akira since every couple needs one so it got me thinking the song partners in crime by set it off for some reasons,to me at least, fits akira and whichever girl he is paired with so i thought you could have that as 'their' song

Youbwont have to but it would be nice if you considered it (but if you aren't continuing the storybjust ignore my review)

Anyway thanks for checking my review XP