Love this, and would eventually maybe see it expanded on, if you ever have the time, but it would be fine staying as a one shot if you don't. It's really a scene I wish would have happened in the show. I love your stories, posted on here and the other site. I normally go to the other site though when reading your stories, and forget you post them on here, too. I also get caught up and forget to leave reviews but I promise to try and review more of your works because they deserve it. :D

D MN!
nailed it!
love how you write how we all think it should go
and have them say what needs said
great job!

I think Jason took plenty away from Elizabeth. I think Elizabeth is a giver, too. She and Jason both are sucked dry by the fakers and takers in their lives.

Awesome one shot. Any chance you may try to expand it some day. Frankly, I'd love to see Sam's perfect little world crumble in any way possible but yeah, that isn't going to happen to the princess of Port Charles. Who knows maybe when all is said and done, she'll pack her brats and her two Jasons on that tin tub of hers and float out of town. I'd hate to lose either Drew or Jason but if it rids the world of Sam McCall it is a chance I'd take. I can say I liked the truth's both Liz and Carly spoke and would love for them to be more than frenemies some day. Nice story. Glad you are posting more often.

I wish that this will be the way they handle Liz finding out about Sam and Jason. I'm just hoping they don't make her the bad person so Sam can look like the victim. I think this is a realistic way to handle things. I would love to see what Carly will do with this information. Including the info about what Sam did to Jake. Great job!

Is this going to be a Liz and Jason story or will Liz get with Drew love you story so far

Loved it

Nice, but I hate that Elizabeth overheard.

Wow! I'm glad Carly and Elizabeth hashed it out. I never could understand why Carly was so pro Sam. I liked that Elizabeth finally told her everything that Sam did to her and her boys. Carly knows Franco so well. It never occurred to me why he went after Michael and it's scary what Carly said. Elizabeth should listen to her and Jason. Elizabeth is correct because he was right about all of the men Elizabeth was involved in. I can't wait to see where you take this story. I would love to see a friendship between Elizabeth and Carly.

Wow! This was good!

Wow. That was really powerful, although I'm not sure that I agree that Liz was always a taker. She gave plenty to Jason as well. This tells me that Liz is really feeling pretty low self-esteem.

But Franco... Carly made some good points. Things worth thinking about.

We know that in the end game TPTB at GH will put together whomever is most popular, and Friz is popular. Just as JaSam, for some unknown reason, is. How Jason could ever really forgive her actions against Jake, Cam and Liz is unfathomable. It annoys the heck out of me that no one else knows her history but those immediately involved.

But worse, that all of the adults involved; Liz, Jason and Lucky did not ever hold her accountable, and in doing so disrespected those boys mightily. THAT is what really bothers me about the writing regarding this topic. As a mother, it's simply not something I could get past, nor would I want to take the chance ever again with a person who had been capable of those actions.

Rather like Carly is saying about Franco; that a leopard never really changes his spots. When something goes wrong, he'll revert to kind. The same could and should be said about Sam.

Redemption is possible with truly contrite people who took accountability and responsibility for their prior actions. Neither of these two really had to.

Nice one-shot, or longer story if you want to take this on. :)

I loved this one-shot. I think that Elizabeth needs to really think clearly when it comes to Franco. I hope you write more on this.

I love this story and I really hope that you continue this story to see where it goes. I love the conservation between Carly and Liz.

Please pretty pretty please continue this with Carly blowing up the child endangering whore's life.