| Reviews for Fractured |
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candi711 chapter 3 . 4/3/2018 Very cute :) I am so glad that Olivia went over to Amanda's apartment to see what was going on. It is interesting to see how fast Olivia's emotions went from frustrated to concerned to compassionate all in a matter of minutes. It was heartbreaking to hear what Amanda had endured in Atlanta and what she thought of herself, but at least Olivia helped her through it. That line at the end with Amanda telling Liv that she was not old was very funny and made me feel like the story ended on a light note. Great job :) keep it up! |
IamAwriterYAY chapter 3 . 3/13/2018 Aww squeal needed |
piakat04 chapter 3 . 3/12/2018 Another powerful story. How Olivia went from being so angry with Amanda to caring and even cuddling with her was a beautiful thing. I can't wait to see what else you come up with! |
Hela chapter 3 . 3/12/2018 Really very well written and credible. I would have liked that everything you wrote after Patton happened so in the episodes. Because we know that Amanda confessed what had happened to him in Barba but not entirely to Liv and that Liv would have been the best person to comfort her. Congratulations for your exellent job! |
r.xlivia chapter 3 . 3/11/2018 This was beautiful. Very angsty, but i really liked this! I love a good angsty fanfic! thank you for this! |
Marchitayska chapter 3 . 3/11/2018 I was hoping for something new from you since you finished you last story. There are so many Liv taking care of Amanda fics, but this is original and perfectly flawless. I love it. I had a bit of a giggle at the last line as well. Nice way to end an entirely tense and emotional story. Thank you |
sheepish123 chapter 3 . 3/11/2018 What a nice surprise it was to get 3 updates in a row in my inbox! I was so glad to see another story from you. I wish this had actually happened in the show, with Olivia making sure that Amanda was okay in the aftermath of the Patton situation and providing so much comfort and care. I'm glad Amanda was able to open up to Liv and get everything out into the open. Thank you for such an emotional and sweet story. Can't wait to see what you write next. :) |