I hope Aegon, Rhaenys, and Elia will be held hostage in separate houses

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Absolutely love this chapter, can’t wait for more

Kinda pointless to read after this chapter lol because the last paragraphs in each chapter just tells you the future already so what’s the point? None

Could've just kept Cersei and Jamie together and put Tytos with someone else. Have to admit this promise of Tytos taking Jamie's place as Cersei's incestual love kind of puts me off on the fic already.

And it showed a lot of promise too. It's kind of odd how something as simple as a 'pairing' can instantly tarnish an otherwise great fic.

why are you making it incest, and with cersei of all people, nobody actually likes her :/ also... incest why? this almost kills the story, would be an order of magnitude better without.

Ever going to do a fic with a Oc paired with Catelyn, Sansa and Arya

The story started out ok and ended as of this chapter as disappointing. Too many POV's that don't do anything, not enough cross over content to justify the tag, and a plot that doesn't know what direction it wants to go in. I don't recommend this story to fans of either HP or GoT fandoms.

I expected more from marriage between Cercy and whoremonger.

por favor continua me encanta la historia y muchas gracias por subirla

This entire story I thought tytos was harry, mind blown.

Eh

Seriously? This was written as if Tytos was the made up nobody from Harry Potter that no one cares about and not actually Harry Potter? Misleading and stupid. I have never before written a negative review in the many hundreds of stories I’ve read and reviewed. How about you be considerate and put O/C as the main character instead of Harry Potter so you don’t waste people’s time.

Doesn’t make sense. If it was that easy to raise dead and keep fighting, whoever Tyon was in a previous life ‘and miraculously knows who Tytos was also even though Tytos has no clue about him’ would have conquered the world easily. Now with the powers of the night king apparently and complete surprise on his side and no wall to keep them out it would be done. Not to mention all the other wars going on. I will likely read one more chapter but I doubt any more. Story was good until this chapter though.

I can' stand incest, sorry