| Reviews for Invocation of the Muse |
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Neurotell chapter 10 . 6/19 welp. she shattered him. good luck with that one sasori ALSO IM CRYING. |
Sidereum Nocte chapter 10 . 3/19 This story hurt my heart. I look for a resolution to soothe my soul and there is none. This is the kind of story that my heart hates the most, but keeps coming back to. (She’s a masochist that way.) I appreciate your writing. Thank you. |
Lljj chapter 10 . 11/25/2019 Hi! I am very happy to have found this story. I've been looking for stories from the SasoSaku couple for days, but I only found the abandoned ones. An endless sadness ... But I got here and could not be more satisfied. Loved the college atmosphere you created. It was wonderful for the development of the relationship between Sasori and Sakura. Everything was so intense between them! I was a little sad about this ending, but it seems the most correct for both. I really admired your writing. I read the stories with the help of Google translator and saw few errors in translation, which shows how well you write. Thank you for sharing this beauty of history. And for having completed! XOXO! |
Paloma chapter 10 . 1/7/2019 I just read the whole thing on one sitting and holy fuck. I really loved it. The ending was really sad but also felt like a reality-check. God, I'm just so hurt and angry about these two, why can't you two sort things ouuuuut. I really loved your story and, even though I think you meant it to end this way, I really hope someday I'll get to read about this artist and his muse again 3 Great work! 3 |
rufnkiddingme chapter 10 . 11/15/2018 OMG! I finished this in 4 hours. I loved your story! Thank you for sharing! |
pizzachickenfingersbuffalosauc chapter 10 . 5/22/2018 Ok so I promised a long review for the final chapter. Honestly I'm disappointed in the ending-I should remember that not every story has a happy ending and knowing both Sakura and Sasori's personalities, its not easy finding a suited ending. I also feel you can get away with a T rating because you weren't so explicit with the sexual scenes between the two and there wasn't a lemon. You could just provide warnings when a sexual scene was about to occur so people would get a heads up. This story captivated me though. I appreciated the significance of art and it's symbolism. I like to draw and paint as a hobby so I'm no die hard artist but I admire art and artists. You can create so much with it and tell your story through your pictures, paintings, drawings, pottery, glass-blowing, etc. Great job! |
pizzachickenfingersbuffalosauc chapter 9 . 5/22/2018 Ok I'm hoping this epilogue has a decent ending. Ugh of course she has to go to graduate school overseas. I forget but was this the only grad school she applied to? It's pretty important to know what grad school you want to attend to but you should have at least one or two options just incase. Although I have to say I'm relieved this didn't turn into a thing with Sasuke and Sakura hooking up or getting back together or admitting there's still deep hidden feelings there. |
pizzachickenfingersbuffalosauc chapter 8 . 5/22/2018 I know their relationship isn't really healthy but I'm hoping SasoSaku doesn't end things on the final chapter. Also, for the last chapter I'll leave a much longer review. |
pizzachickenfingersbuffalosauc chapter 7 . 5/22/2018 Adore Naruto and Sakura's friendship. Lol of course Sasuke is such a pour puss about SasoSaku. Honestly I hope he isn't in other chapters, I'm not a Sasuke fan and I don't need him fucking things up. |
pizzachickenfingersbuffalosauc chapter 6 . 5/22/2018 "I am going to worship you," Damn. |
pizzachickenfingersbuffalosauc chapter 5 . 5/22/2018 Hey, So I made another account. Like just now lol. I was the one leaving reviews under the name SunshineofRAY. When it comes to the Naruto fandom, I enjoy reading stories where the focus doesn't heavily revolve on them as ninjas (mostly because I can get bored of long chapters that involve fighting) and I really like how this story is set at a university. I just graduated from university and I'm sick of reading high school stories because I don't really relate to them. Sometimes they can be entertaining but I like more maturity to them. I still feel Sakura is OOC to an extent but at the same time it's nice seeing her displayed with no exaggerated emotion. She is a very emotional girl and is supposed to be the most human but I feel some stories make Sakura's emotions dramatically up and down. |
SunshineofRAY chapter 4 . 5/22/2018 “Thinking of you” that’s so cute :) |
SunshineofRAY chapter 3 . 5/22/2018 So it means so far Sasori and Sakura have a FWB type of situation but I’m foreshading something a little more. Not to sound creepy but will there be a full on lemon in this story? |
SunshineofRAY chapter 2 . 5/22/2018 I think Sakura is a bit OOC in this chapter, mainly because she had sex with Sasori so soon (not that there’s anything wrong with that) but it isn’t her character. However I like the chemistry between them and hope to see more in the future chapters :) |
SunshineofRAY chapter 1 . 5/21/2018 Wow if I wasn’t locked out of my account I’d totally favor and follow this story. I promise to leave a review for each chapter! Nothing much to say but clearly I’m engaged and I love reading stories where art is significant. |