Thank you for the story. It was nicely done, and sticks to original content facts, I liked that.
There were some very beautiful sentences I noticed.
Your characters depiction were of quality as well, a bit darker than the ones from the books but it fitted them well.

Absolutely not my ship but a great story nonetheless. Really well written and characterised, especially Minerva's grief.

I enjoyed reading this very much. The tension and the teaching dynamic were so well crafted. I hope you will write more stories with this pairing because I would love to read them!

This is so beautiful!

Excellent finish to the relationship, which, having had shared ardor and then set it aside makes their later vitriol all the more deeply fueled.
The form was nicely chosen as well, fitting in many more ways than the all to oft assigned serpent.
Thanks for another very entertaining read.
M

Oh dear, that actually worked for me!
I had my doubts, given their later animosity, but you've put paid to those and then some.
Onwards!
M

Just enough hear to twing the imagination, nicely done :)
M

A lot of fun so far, characters well within Canon, especially at the time.
M

Love the heat and emotions in this. Please write more!

This story is so good! I’d love to read more of it.

wow! fab ending! but, i don't want this to be the end! lol.
loved the explosive passion between them and then the trust and vulnerability. so good. I've never read any ssmm before... sshg is my otp and it always seems a bit like cheating to read him with someone else... i think you may be opening my mind. thanks so much for sharing this!

Fun chapter! And thanks for the shout-out! Update soon!

Oh my!

(Love it :)

Absolutely sizzling! Severus had better make up his mind soon or Minerva will make it up for him. Not that I think he'll mind her decision. ;)

absolutely love Min's outfit choice! that moment with AD was fab... interesting backstory there I'm sure... yup, we totally need this from her POV. lol her confidence is wonderful, it's great to see Sev a bit wrong footed.