What the hell happened to you?
I've been waiting for who knows how long

Hey really like this story good start to it. Not a lot of HZD stories. Keep it coming.

Still love love it so when are you update please please please update I love this story so much amazing work your doing please update

You should know that links don't work on this website. All links on your page are broken

Love it amazing work hope you update very soon

Ah man why hefestous sorry spelling hope Aloy gets to see his home land hope you update very soon

Keep it up my man, loving the story so far!

Great chapter!
I love your story! Horizon is one of my favorite game, and I was frustated there wasn't an other protagonist with a focus like Aloy in the game. And I discover your story, Vale is such a intriguant person. I like him, him and her works perfectly together.
Every friday I'm excited to read the new chapter.
You do a great job!
Oops I talk a little bit too much (sorry!)
I'm sorry, my English isn't perfect I hope you can anderstand me.

Great Story, feels like I'm reading another expansion, heck feels like the 2nd game xD, great job

Love it so much

Wow this is very intriguing! I would like to see more of this story and you left some sort of a cliffhanger so I was kind of pissed so you owe me one hahaha jk :P

Anyway, I wonder who this random guy is and he's also wearing a Focus! That's interesting. And damn he defeated that machine like it was nothing lol.

What a great chapter! Can't wait to see more and I hope that you'll update soon :D keep up the good work!