I love this. Good job

noice.

Really great concept. In really looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Welp, i love this!

we need more i want a whole story involing this plot

Much Markapooh - Much nice - Very feels
Truh be this being an Oneshot is kind of a waste (not really a waste just don't know how to put it in words) , it has so much potential for another 2-3 ? chapters but I'm not the author ...
Loved it

This story is just DARN awesome! *Throw money at screen!* Take my digital money for crying out loud! You make the best Markapoo story out there! Well beside ADdude, your story is sheer and beautiful perfection!

I love this story! I wish it was longer, or a continued story.

Shame it's a one shot. 'cause this has real good potential.

Well this seems more like the start of a pretty good story. Not really a one shot since nothing was concluded. If you can, keep it going. See what you can come up with. If it's anything like what you've started here, it will probably be pretty good.

This story is one of the best read, good start and the plot is excellent.
Please update soon, for me it would be a dismissal of the material (which is also fantastic)

Please continue this it has so much potential and it's been so long since I've seen a truly fresh idea and story and concept in this fandom and you sir or Madame have found pure gold in story telling form. I hope to see a lot more of this in the futures.

Man i see potential in this story, hope you decide to make a longer one in the future

I ship Markapoo so much I loved this as a one shot. Would love it more if it was a two shot. Just so we could see a flash forward chapter with an expanded relationship between them. But still good work!

I think I ship Heekapoo and Marco now. This story was so good, and now I just want to know what will happen with Toffee. Good job on the story :)