Omg what is she doing to Charlie!?

Love, love, love this story! Your writing style and character development is so outstanding! Please keep updating, I am hooked!

Hi, I really like this story a lot. Can you please update it sooner? How many more chapters are there? Please update soon. This story is too good.
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And here comes the was... dun dun dun

Update soon

Aaaaaah I'm so excited you updated! I've been waiting for this, yaaaaay

I did not expect this to happen, woah! I can't wait to read what happens next.

Hope you're staying stage. xx

I just binged this story. I freakin love it and I’m dying to know was that bitch put in addie’s drink! Please update soon! I need to know what happens next!

Woof, I’m curious as to what that brat did this time. I’m happy you’re back and can’t wait for the next chapter, whenever it comes out. I love reading your story!

such a great chapter :)
Addie is fighting back at Miranda and doing her best to keep her head- she has the patience of a saint for not hexing the bitch every time she rears her head.

Miranda using such underhand tactics- is great to read and makes my dislike grow and grow- LOVING IT. how she's juts friendly enough to slip under the radar with charlie.

charlie is such a sweetheart, the way he reads her and makes such lovely gestures when he's taking care of her- great update 10/10

Y’all Miranda needs to get slapped

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Your way of describing People, Situations and Landscapes is incredible realistic. It is easy to imagine and follow your story. One Reason why I'm sad that there is no next chapter...

I really like Adelyn and Charlie together and her friendship with George. George the Gossipqueen. I love it!

The beginning of your story is great! A little bit of Adelyns Hogwarts background and then what happend during the war. You describe the sadness and depression afterwards very good. My personal worst part of the entire books was when Fred died. I have a twin and I couldn't imagine how it must have hurt George losing his. For me that's where most authors don't get the right tone but you did great.

And the law, Holla die Waldfee! (Sorry I'm German :D)

Even though it's *enter fitting disapproving english word here* it makes the situation very interesting to follow. Not only Marinda but also Daryl are great, I really hate her but I can't dislike him... And I couldn't stop grinning after George arrived. He is the perfect best friend.

So please update soon and don't abandon this piece of art. There are way too many discontinued Charlie storys, it's quite sad.

Till next time!
Helen

We’ll George just loves riling people up doesn’t he. Lol

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just discovered your story and I'm hooked their relationship is like a slow building tango and its perfect, especially with how Miranda keeps trying to edge her way closer and closer.

Charlie is so real and believable that this is by far my favourite version of him of FF- he's not all smoothness and-' gung-ho get the girl'- hes got doubts, fears and principles when it comes to Addie- the fact that he wants to be stone cold sober before he tries to lay it on the line it so sweet. despite his experience with women, with addie he's a boy all over again.

George is wonderful- the way you've depicted him trying to find his rhythm since Fred's death is so touching and so realistic- after all it's like losing the other half of a conversation you've always been a part of. the way he fielded Miranda's prying questions and knows exactly what she is up to it great to read, he's such a great friend and brother.

I cant wait to read more from these characters- your writing is lovely and heartfelt and Addie is a breath of fresh air :)

I love this story, and I hope there will be future baby weasleys

Yesss, George! It's time to meddle!

Loved Charlie confronting Daryl too. It's offically game on now that both of their intentions are totally clear!

I cant tell you how happy I was when I realized you've been updating this story within the past few months. I actually have a chance to know how it all ends! So happy lol Excited to read more!

No Charlie! You were so closeeeeee. I really like this new character you added. Daryl sets a little more fire under Charlie that he needs to finally say something!

Excited to read more!