Nice start and certainly a different stance from most stories and its great to see one based on Aife as she is a most underused character.

I do hope you continue with this though i must admit I'm disappointed with the end where what you have written implys that Bo does not believe Lauren is worth fighting for , that wrong Lauren is always worth it.

Will looking out for updates on this and your other stories, keep up the good work.

Aife did know best. She was my favorite too.

Love it! Bravo Aife! :) and Grrrrr Bo! Dyson, no comment! lol! :) Yes, a little more of this story would be good :)

I liked it. Great job. I can see more chapters, but no pressure.