| Reviews for Four Walls |
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   olyoxenfree chapter 58 . 5/3 HOLY HELL WHAT AN ENDING! I didn’t even try to guess how this would end and I’m still taken aback. Luckily the sequel already has 42 chapters so after that pesky thing we humans need called sleep I’m definitely gonna dive into it. Thank you so much for writing this! It’s freaking brilliant! |
| olyoxenfree chapter 6 . 5/2 This story is my new obsession. Sayonara to all the work I was supposed to do this weekend. This is fucking brilliant! |
| WritingForMySoul12 chapter 37 . 9/11/2019 Bella needs to tell Alice |
| WritingForMySoul12 chapter 29 . 9/11/2019 Oh great he is back... |
| WritingForMySoul12 chapter 27 . 9/11/2019 Yes! Sex! |
| WritingForMySoul12 chapter 20 . 9/10/2019 These two :) |
| Horseshoefijzer chapter 31 . 10/30/2018 Damn man, I’m a real rosella shipper myself, so this does not help! |
| Horseshoefijzer chapter 2 . 10/29/2018 I like this so far. Alls good it makes sense...better than how the real one went I think, I don’t really like the fact that the volturi revealed themselves, I prefer the secrecy of it all, but I do look forward to seeing how that pans out |
| TerribleTempy chapter 19 . 9/28/2018 Just wanted to really compliment the story and how well you adjusted Bella. Many props to that. So far, it is really well done, and if this ship wasnt so dead in the water, I'd love to see some new stuff. As for the Elphaba Cullen messages, yea you have some errors here and there, but you're human and entitled to making mistakes. Also, assuming what a character would and wouldn't do in an AU is hilarious, no one is telling Martin what Jon Snow would say or invalidating Rowling's perception of her characters. That's the beauty of creating and someone needs to seriously find their happy place. Dont even pay it any mind. Great read so far. |
| Elphaba Cullen chapter 53 . 9/24/2018 Correction: “I skulked” - read a dictionary; that means something different to what you intended. You meant “sulked”. |
| Elphaba Cullen chapter 42 . 9/23/2018 Correction: “I shuttered at the memory’. Wrong; look the word up. The correct word is SHUDDERED. And to say “I could care less” means you DO care, the saying is “I COULDNT care less”. |
| Elphaba Cullen chapter 10 . 9/22/2018 1. Alice would never call anyone “sluts’. 2. If you’re a male - fuck you, I hope you die a virgin. 3. If you’re female; you should be ashamed of yourself. How dare you propagate that misogynistic, patriarchal double standard and slur. Do better! |
| Sassyvampmama chapter 59 . 8/27/2018 Thanks for sharing. |
| Guest chapter 57 . 6/27/2018 Please update this it's been a month. I hope bella kills the voultri |
| neweldi chapter 59 . 5/23/2018 Thanks, I like it :-) |
