| Reviews for The Ghoul, the Government, and the Heroes |
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flakeshake07 chapter 20 . 7/19 cool story |
carleyputnam97 chapter 20 . 6/17 This is the beat book in the whole wide world! I would super duper appreciate it if you are updating this anytime soon. And in Wattpad as well- this is my 5th? Time reading this and it never gets old. |
Queijinho quente chapter 20 . 4/22 Damn, that was well written. I love how you represent kaneki's personalities. It was a good time, I'm excited for the next update. A hug and a kiss. Byeeeee o(〃〃)o |
IheLam chapter 5 . 4/10 why does he keep giving information ? why ? healing powers too ? why does he give up every fucking advantage he has? next what ? he'll tell them about his kagune ? Please don't really please don't, please please don't. Why don't you just kill yourself it would be more easy ? pssorry about that i'm ranting before i finish the chapter... don't takeit to heart, i just love ranting. |
IheLam chapter 5 . 4/10 ok i can get why he tell them about not being humain, but why does he tell them about the strengh of ghoul ? Seriously, he knows he's been arrested, he knows how the human in his world acted with ghoul: extermination and that's it. He has no way of knowing they will react any differently. Sp why does he give them information that they can unse against him ? I mean if they don't know about superhuman strenght then they will think a simple cell or handcuffs are enough to restrain him and if things get more dangerous for him, he could always surprise them and escape. But by giving them the information he give them the possibilty to restrain him more efficacely. And how come he doesn't recognise stark? I mean he stayed in that world for at least a couple of months, to be able to get fake papers , a job and an appart and we know he made resaerch and discovered that there are no ghouls or CCG, so he knows that the world is different, so he must have made more research to get to know that new world better, to see what other difference there is ? especially if he wanted to blend in and you tell me that in all his research he never saw anything about the avengers, the alien invasion or tony stark and stark industry or even mutants. And even if he didn't for some reason make reasearch, you tell me that none of the news talked about or showed the avengers at all ? |
Guest chapter 20 . 4/3 This is an amazingly well written story. In fact, it is the only good tokyo ghoul crossover I have read. I am excited for the next update and did not hesitate pushing the favourite and follow button. P.s. don’t listen to the angry straightship fangirls. This is your story, not theirs. They don’t get to have a say in how you write your own book. |
Savirox chapter 20 . 2/19 This story is amazing ! Please keep writing it. :) |
Dawning of the day chapter 20 . 2/16 Oh my god, update please! you have only written one story, do you know how FRUSTRATING it is to be waiting years for your next update? Do you? if you do, you will update soon |
Dawning of the day chapter 20 . 2/2 hey, um, when was the last update cause i just read this all in one hour i love it that much ps, it is feb 2nd, 2020 that is am asking dis! |
Dawning of the day chapter 10 . 2/2 this series theme songs; cradles and heathens i loved this, it is sooo capturing Kaneki's essence! You're good! |
Silent Sound 715 chapter 20 . 1/28 Glad to have you back! I always enjoyed this story and hoped it would continue! Great writing and great plot. I think Touka would be an interesting character in this if you could find a way to bring her in. |
Kanekitty chapter 20 . 1/26 Oh man every character interaction gets me so hyped for the pairing! It’s turning into a yaoi Kaneki harem and I freaking LOVE IT! I swear you’re one of the rare few crossovers that are well written and doesn’t feature a boring cliche story of kaneki with touka. Love all the flirtation with the guys in this! I’m still loving Kaneki and Loki as my fave pair! |
Guest chapter 20 . 1/26 I love the story with just Kaneki! If there were other characters I don’t think the plot would flow as well. I mean the whole point is reading how Kaneki fits in with the avengers; this new group of people he isn’t used to and forging new bonds... adding in other tg characters would take away from that. |
Guest chapter 20 . 1/26 Just want to commended you on how you write his multiple personalities! You really manage to paint an accurate description of what it could be like of he had DID! I’m just wondering of you or someone you know has the disorder and that’s why you’re able to describe it so well? Either way thank you so much for the representation! |
Death of Snipers chapter 20 . 1/26 It might be the fact that it’s been a while, and I need to reread the old chapters, but I have to say, I feel the time skips and jump cuts are a bit too disorganized to fully make sense. Especially since there’s no indication of how much time passes between them or what is causing the travel. Like why Kaneki bothered stopping by the tower with the mission so close It’s still well written, that issue is just a bit distracting |