Not much progress here, other than getting the scene from Ace's perspective. I hope you won't do that in the future, sure, you can have Ace reflect on the events, but there's no need to pretty much repeat a chapter, kinda wastes it if that's pretty much the only thing that happens.
Still, it's an interesting idea, one that I'd like to see continue.

Alright, I'm on board and interested to see what's going to happen. You might want to add characters so that the story can reach a more specific audience, OC for example.