I must say, Im intrigued.

Shadow doesn't need a chaos emerald to use most of his chaos powers. He only needs it to use chaos control.

Jesus! That was way too dark for a kid’s game!

Why would Shadow brutally kill those mercenaries?! He’s NOT a murderer! What’s wrong with you?!

Congratulations on completing the story. I've been really busy for the past few months, so I'm glad I found the time to finish it. It was a fun ride. I like how you added your own ideas while connecting stuff from previous games. I wish you luck on your next works! :)

"Seeing how far behind in the story I am'" Oh boy, time to catch up!

I apologize for my late review, but there is a reason why I'm so late. Assuming this is the one, congratulations on 400 reviews for TIR! You deserve each and every one of these, Ruby!

Well, all good things must come to an end. Zerinn has been sentenced to jail for a long time, Knuckles went back to Angel Island, Sonic and Tails are off on another adventure, and Gadget can finally rest easy. Overall, this was a nice way to end the story. While there were some things throughout the story I wasn't particulary fond of, that didn't take away from the whole experience. I would go into what I like and didn't like, but I'd rather save that for some other time.

While Grammar, puncuation, and some spelling werebig issues from this story, that didn't ruin the fact that this story has a lot of creativity behind it and a lot of talent. Those were the highlights of this story.

What more can I say, this has to be one of the best Sonic Forces rewrites out there. Good luck to you on your future projects, and I'll see you next time!

~SD321 (SpiderDom321)

A great ending to a good story. This was so wonderful to read and I am excited to see more of your stories in the future!

With that said there is only one thing left to do: A BIG group hug for everyone! (Even Zerinn and The Jackal Squad)

The End.

Patience Metal Sonic have patience you’ll get your chance at Usurpering Eggman control from the Doctor. Aaaand better luck next time Eggman onto the next plan. XP

Sorry Zenrith you gotta pay for your crimes soooo Yeah at least your in prison...heck let’s give him a full pardon . Infinite will live on forever in the series.

I love this story you did really awesome well done well done. *claps hands*

what a way to end the story!
excellent job here

A nicely done conclusion!

All in all, this was a pretty good story. I won't deny that there were some parts I wasn't too fond of, but as a whole, I think this was a better handled story than the original game. Good job!

Congratulations Ruby, on finishing your story, and good luck on all your future projects.

These last six chapters were all great, and they are full of good character moments very much like always. It feel satisfying reading this story from the pacing which still is like very good sonic comic book series, and it's cool to see storylines finishing up.

The ending is very heartwarming as well bittersweet to read, and the characters look like they will have bright future even, through they still rebuilding everything.

It's nice to see Saber become leader, and for Quartz to have his arm back to normal.

Thanks Rudy, for writing this great story, and good luck in the future.

Congratulations, Ruby. What must be the greatest Sonic Forces stories of all time, it has come to a stop. This story is worth being on TV Tropes or on Wikipedia!
Up to 46 Chapters now; this story is a mega-large novel. I'm happy that you were able to finish it.
I hope to see more stories from you and possibly see a spin-off/sequel to this story.
Keep on rocking, never lose your sense of creativity,
Cheah.

*Applauses for a minute straight

Congratulations, Ruby! You've done so much for your Sonic Forces rewrite. Over a year since you first published it, you were able to complete it. And I was hooked ever since I found it. I don't recall seeing it on day one, but I found you when you were kind to review Revengeful Resistance back then. When I wanted to return the favor, I knew this was going to be a big project.

A lot of ups and downs took place, which set the tone of the characters and the setting rather appropriately. It's a lot more realistic to have Sonic, Tails, and the rest of the Resistance have those feelings of guilt and remorse after the Phantom Ruby war affected everyone. But there was still that sliver of determination and anticipation that they'll officially restore Mobius to its former state while Eggman stays quiet after another exasperating failure.

You managed to complete this journey in full, and I couldn't be more proud for you. Update after update, more people were intrigued to see how this story was going to pan out. Despite the punctuation, spelling, and grammar mistakes, you continued to improve with little to no mistakes with every new chapter you post. Not everything was perfect, but that doesn't make it a terrible fanfic. I thought it was still wonderful from start to finish.

Again, congrats on the accomplishment, Ruby! With you getting closer to 400 reviews, there's no doubt that you'll reach that milestone. And you truly deserve it. I'm happy to hop aboard this journey and give you my feedback/support throughout the adventure. Thanks for returning the favor for my rewrite, too. I really hope you get some rest because after finishing a long story like this while being busy with your life outside FFN, you probably need some. Nevertheless, I'm glad I found this story, and it was always a thrill to read it. Until next time, I'll see you next time whenever I update my work or you have a new upload.

~TheGameNguyener (TGN)

Dude, this was incredible. I'm so glad that I was able to read this story. The ending was just perfect and beautiful. Can't wait for your next story!

I could use some tip. I'm working on typing my first story and it is a long time since I used Microsoft Word.
I know I would like to have do this on my own, but I could use some help.