| Reviews for The Note |
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Guest chapter 2 . 4/22/2018 Oh my gosh yes! I absolutely love it! Alex is already making friends, and they have a good set up going. Alex attaching to people is always both so sweet and sad. I love how Yassen never treats Alex's nightmares as false alarms and always checks. I can imagine their bedrooms being close together despite the large house. It's nice that they get some peace to set everything up before the action happens! I love how Yassen is all "don't displease me again" while Alex was just watching a movie with them a couple weeks later. Protective Yassen is my favorite, and Alex having fun is also my favorite lol. Thank you so much! |
Night Riders chapter 2 . 4/22/2018 Awesome chapter! So sweet and full of emotion. I have absolutely no criticism at all. This is amazing. I loved both chapters but by far my favorite part was the the last scene where Alex waited up for him. That was adorable. You’re an extremely talented writer and this is a great fic. Very original. I’m really looking forward to your next chapter so please please please update as soon as possible. I’m hooked on this story and I promise to review every chapter and if I ever miss one, I’ll make it up with an extra long review. This is truly an amazing fic. Splendid job! |
Op-fan chapter 2 . 4/22/2018 I really liked this chapter, I like how you give snippets about Alex and Yassen's life, and life in the compound. Maybe in the next chapter I'd like some more details about what exactly it is they're doing, in the same fashion of snippets. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to your next update! |
AryaDumbledore chapter 1 . 4/1/2018 omg I love it soooo much! especially he last part! |
AryaDumbledore chapter 1 . 4/1/2018 hahahahahaha the last bit is great! all of it is amazing! |
motorcrosszaha chapter 1 . 3/12/2018 Wow! I love your writing style, it's very nice to read. Plus, the way you have Alex and Yassen interest is quite cute. It's awkward cute, but cute. Give me more! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2018 Awesome! |
Op-fan98 chapter 1 . 3/6/2018 Nice one! Well-written and I like the playfulness between Alex and Yassen. Since I suppose this is a one-shot, I'd like a follow-up, maybe see what's become of them some years later. |
Night Riders chapter 1 . 3/6/2018 Awesome chappie! You’re a great writer and your pacing is perfect. The plot is exciting. I can tell that Yassen and Alex will have a romantic relationship. I don’t really read that sort of stuff but I know you can pull it off beautifully. This sounds really interesting and o would love to read it so can you not make it too much romance. Like, kisses and stuff are fine but not too much deeper than that. You can do whatever you like but I’d love it if you’d consider what I’m saying. Anyway, awesome story and I’d love to see more. Update soon! |