Reviews for Long May You Run
Keaye chapter 9 . 8/27
I have the exact same headcannon with hidetoshi
Keaye chapter 6 . 8/27
The twins headcannon gives me life too. There's a lot of good scenes you cut out but what you have here is succinct and perfectly paced so no complaints.
Keaye chapter 3 . 8/27
Mutatsu and Keisuke hurt. Almost lost it. Almost
Keaye chapter 1 . 8/27
I remember reading this years ago after playing FES and it still holds up. I was holding back tears reading kenji's part
Raj8 chapter 10 . 1/26
This was really touching to read thanks for taking the time to post it
Dougio chapter 10 . 10/19/2019
I've been looking constantly for a good fanfiction that explores the topic about Minato's death, which to me is surprisingly hard to find. This story made me sad and I enjoyed all the emotions the characters had, you did a great job at writing this story.
noahpocalypse1 chapter 10 . 8/6/2019
So beautiful. I teared up several times.
VyLeLi chapter 10 . 1/30/2019
What a wonderful piece of fanfiction.
Eyeradei chapter 10 . 10/24/2018
oh hi I just found both fics and I love P3 so much and I'm not crying you're crying aaaaaaa SQUEEEEEEEEE
Sciara chapter 3 . 10/24/2018
Crying in the club and the club is my bedroom. I'm slowly losing the professionalism. We'll get keyboard smashing soon enough. I'm glad the reviews are making your days better, however! They are worth my tears.

By itself, I've had a pretty shitty day. Reading fanfics always make me happy. Re-reading a fanfic that I absolutely adore and get to rant on about to the creator? Hell yeah.

SEES staying together in a feeble attempt to not crumble into pieces knowing full well one of theirs is on their deathbed? Illegal. This is not allowed.
Yukari's denial is palpable and it hurts. From the sudden realization, to her mother to needing to move on - this is a lot, even for someone who joined to fight death incarnate.
Godspeed, Yukari (even if the Answer makes you face that reality a lot faster and harsher).

Tower in P3 is that other parent we get alongside the Hierophants in the series and I'm glad you addressed it so my heart can be broken. Take it. Take it, you monster.
He didn't think he'd need to officiate a funeral there anymore because theres only one damn person he cares about over there and suddenly, your pseudo-son's dead.
There's nothing more cruel to make a parent bury their child.

Following up with Fortune is cruel as fuck and I'd kindly ask you to stop but I've got 7 chapters to go.
Ft. more guilt from a medical student-to-be, using him as the perspective for the funeral is fantastic since he's keen enough to be able to notice the details but the refusal to see Minato's body is wonderfully painful. Finding reasons, gaining none. A medical student.
Fucking /awful./ Turn on location, author. I just want to talk.
Sciara chapter 2 . 10/22/2018
Whoo, gotta love delays. Anyways -

Starting a little early there. /Just a bit./ Can you let up on the angst for like, thirty seconds? No? I deserve that.

The greatest wins always suffer the most losses, don't they. Aigis' cold determination that /no/, no, Minato cannot be dying, because he's only really started to live, and Mitsuru's attempts to keep herself together even with the inevitable knowledge stings.
Add to it Minato's attempts to pretend he's alright, alongside her personal guilt on forgetting while Minato and Aigis obviously remembered -
... You know, I thought I was done mourning. I never will be, I suppose, and especially not after reading your anthologies.

The little references to what will inevitably lead to The Answer (even if you haven't played it, which is absolutely fair) is bittersweet as they haven't had their closure yet.

The bits in Aigis' part regarding the reactions of the other SEES members are just like tiny shards of glass into my heart. I did not ask for this. Why do you do this.

[That they'll do anything it takes to get him out of this alive.]
Now that is uncalled for. for.

I have no more individual comments for the rest of the chapter other than it's? So good? And cruel? I'm suing for emotional distress.
Sciara chapter 1 . 10/19/2018
I was actually going to post LMYR reviews on AO3 after reading your profile, but hell to it, let's keep it here.)
I'm trying to keep this semi-professional but that might crumble by the end of this. We'll see.

AroAce Minato is valid and I'm so glad you went that route, if only so it's easier to read since it can get hard to read something with a bunch of ships (I admit I have my own reasons as well, ha). Queerplatonic relationship with Aigis is perfect and I wish to insert a clap emoji.

'Minato is dying.'
God. Having that thought just abruptly enter their mind, thinking how they could have forgotten - and then remembering and thinking about the past month. The way you detailed their point of view of Minato's declining health to the sudden onslaught of knowledge is heartbreaking.

Wanting to do something, but knowing there is nothing they can truly do. The harsh reality that they, in a way, contributed to him ending up like this. And at this point, they don't know what Minato was thinking.

The Journey of the Fool is over, the but the Fool's links are going to be stuck for a long time, huh.

Hermit's description of Minato's physical form is... depressing. As if she didn't notice before, just like how Aigis was gone all this time. Now that SEES remembers, she notices Aigis too, and it all just hits and nothing makes sense to her. All except that her students and Council President are mourning.

I'll admit I hate Magician with a burning passion (give me Junpei, FES!) but you've made him work so that I don't want to stab him at first sight. I enjoyed how he took notice of the details that were out of place, connecting the members of SEES to how Minato was missing to his 'illness' to the ambulance coming to a road that only led to a school.
... Sorry, Kenji.
Allstarall chapter 10 . 10/3/2018
Thanks for making this story. So many feelings. I like AroAce Minato.
Allstarall chapter 10 . 10/3/2018
Fitting the the last chapter was of the non-human, and highly important characters.
Allstarall chapter 9 . 10/3/2018
Everyone is paired with someone else matched. I now realize this.
Persona 4 and 5 reference! Intriguing that the student council were the ones to meet them.
Effects of a death even years after. The Emperor does help, if only behind the scenes.
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