Another one of your great stories! Thanks for keeping us entertained! Look forward to your future work.

really hope you keep making more for this fanfic
i really loved it

Well ... Ok then ..uh sick of all this chick flick romance crap ... A man and woman can be ya know just friends and super close as well ... I didnt see a smoldering romantic chemistry between Ezra and Sabine so yeah its kinda getting old and honestly takes too much attention away from the actual journey and adventure but i will say that this is an amazing and well written piece loved the begining through the plot twists climax and ending great job superb even thank you for your hard work and time i can tell by reading it you spent alot of time enwrgy and of course poured a quite refreshingly unique and verry active intelligent funny seriois endless imagination and verry berry vivid mind and passion abound into the story i would love to read a series you create thank you again

Could you update this story

Penis

Awesome story

I just finished binge-reading Chapters 1-6, a very good read! A lot of stories, that I’ve read, put too much of “our world” into “their world”, which ruins the “in a galaxy far, far, away” vibe. Excellent work!
One (small) suggestion: I think the ‘flow’ of your story would benefit from the use of “contractions”.
“I’m sorry” instead of “I am sorry” ... “I’d expect” instead of “I would expect”. — It’s a small thing, but I think it’d help the flow... And that’s my only criticism.
AN EXCELLENT READ, apart from that (1) small thing.

I also hope to learn that Ezra’s link to The Force has improved, during his exile. I can understand his not wanting to jump right back into the life & training of a Jedi Knight, but hopefully he does something important ... & eventually rejoins The New Jedi Order.
I’ll continue my binge-reading, now. Again: Great work!

In the second to last paragraph you mention 'mini-chlorines' I just mean to help, Im not having a go but I believe you mean Midi-Chlorians (The living force beings inside of blood whih in legend etc. would determin how powerful a jedi was e.g. Ankakin was born witg 20,000)

In the in the season finale Star Wars Rebels fire across the Galaxy referred to the ghost crew as his family there was no romantic attachments to Sabine no matter how much you want to be and by the end of the scene in which Return of the Jedi takes place you can tell she's already married like I said the other guy said this is good fanfiction but a little ooc for character-wise but you did a good job right and most fanfiction just pull it out of the back side oh and just so you know Disney's also said the Star Wars anime is a separate entity from the movies themselves and not part of the same Continuum Disney's quote not mines just thought I'd point out that but you did a good job the fanfiction spell wise and get Luke Skywalker in character unlike Disney's Force Awakenings which I know I seen critiquing hypocrite by point out what they said compared I'm only telling you what he said when asked if any characters from Rebels fire across the Galaxy would make an appearance in the new Star Wars movie that was what they said not what I believe thank you

Will there be more?

Fuck I didn’t know it was completed. Now I’m sad. Was a great story, with scarcely any story problems IMO. A few spelling and grammar mistakes but that doesn’t ruin the story.

I really like how you've been putting Ezra. It makes a lot of sense that he struggles so much emotionally. I do find the 5 to 8 times sex sessions a little too much, but I guess you can brush it out as Mandalorian hehe.
Keep going!

Despite some misspellings in the sentences and not having anyone talk in the ending of this chapter, you did a good job with this story chapter. I even love the part where Ezra is made to be Jacen's mentor instead of Luke Skywalker. Even to where Sabine grew her hair back and change it to how she looked season one.

That was an interesting chapter. The crazed warden was pretty funny.

I like how you made this story started from the epilogue and continue from there. I usually don't read fanfictions, but this one actually seems like some that might happen in the next series and is enjoyable to read. The romance between Ezra and Sabine feel a bit too forced because the relationship didn't built up. For example, Sabine finally finds Ezra and first thing she does is kiss him. Then the next day, they have sex.I get this is a fan fiction, but I think you empathize a lot on the sex parts of the story. Ezra, sabine, hera, ahsoka, and basically everyone from rebels were In character in this fan fiction and weren't doing anything that contradicts their personalities unlike Luke in last Jedi. Mentioning Luke, I really think that he should've been more skilled than Ezra mainly because Ezra is five years rusty but that didn't concern me to much. I would give this fan fiction a 8.7, but who am I to judge you like a critic lol. Keep up the good work. Don't let anyone put you down.