Reviews for Fates of Worlds
Nozomi Higurashi chapter 5 . 7/31
Ed's "depression crash" is something I actually have personal experience with, and you described it and the head space it causes pretty well.

First time it happened to me, I wasn't able to be brought out of it for 3 days, and was barely able to be coaxed into drinking water. My family was ready to take me to the hospital when I snapped out of it after having a dream where my grandfather (who had died the night before the crash - that was the trigger) came to me and threatened to tan my hide if I joined him too soon. Needless to say, I woke up, got up, and got something to eat.
Second time lasted a day and a half and had been what made me realize, "Oh, I have PTSD I've been powering through so stubbornly NO ONE NOTICED" and made an appointment with a counselor as soon as they opened the next Monday. I snapped out of that one on my own, large because of that aforementioned stubbornness.
Thiatereika chapter 86 . 8/28/2019
I've really enjoyed all of these stories (CA, SH, and FoW). I've actually reread Catalyst Array twice and am going to probably read it again before moving on to FoWD. I've never played any of the Final Fantasy games, but I do know some about them from watching friends play and Kingdom Hearts. So I can't really comment on that, other than I feel like you did a good job of making it accessible to people who don't know anything about it.

I really enjoyed your characterization of Edward throughout this series. I feel like too many other authors focus on his trigger anger issues revoling around his height. Thre are so many other things to explore, and it was fun to see his other traits at the forefront.

The whole series is quite the adventure. And I really enjoyed how much FoW and SH mirrored each other while still being unique. I also really enjoyed the way you incorporated alchemy with the materia. And parallels between fiends and the gaian monsters was really well done.

Overall I think this might be one of my favorite FMA crossovers. I'll definitely be reading them all again someday :)
Khait Khepri chapter 86 . 7/24/2019
I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier! World went crazy, honestly, and I have a lot going on.

I like how this ended, honestly. While not the stereotypical 'happy ending', I actually prefer 'life going on' and there being trouble in the works. Makes it more real. I also agree that Ed might choose to stay for a while as a watchdog but would move on after a decade or three just to be certain of things before going. And with Trisha being so much like him, who knows? She might be his reincarnation. Or genetics breed true even centuries later.

On another note, I wonder if Al ever attempted to come to this timeline only to either be turned away by the Gate or chose willingly to stay? We the readers, of course, never know as Ed doesn't, but I'm cool with that.
Reishin Amara chapter 85 . 7/18/2019
Snort» thanks bud.(besides Reishin Amara)

Nice seeing this one wrap up ,just got around to reading this since my email was backed up lately...plus I had found a REALLY good fic on sufficient velocity that I basically steamrolled through. Have to admit,creative use of the Moonflow.

Sidenote...FFX had potential for some weird hybrids... we got Yuna and Seymour..Al Bhed and Guada hybrids...and now im imagining a Hypello hybrid thanks to this chapter. A bit surprised we never got a Ronso Hybrid in either game...

Also..I recall the 3 music players from the game were a Bird,Frog,and ...mouse...seriously..what races WERE those three and why did we never see more of them? Way to leave us hanging developers...
Anasazi Darkmoon chapter 84 . 7/9/2019
Wow, I didn't think Seath was an actual name, aside from being used in Dark Souls for Seath the Scaleless. Anyway, I do like the idea of this Oriba race. I can see you've put in a lot of effort with it.
Khait Khepri chapter 71 . 4/17/2019
Ffirst, I forgot to do this when Cygnus appeared. *cuddles Cygnus* Second... *cuddles Bismarck* I can't wait for her aeon form to show up.
Khait Khepri chapter 61 . 2/13/2019
You're welcome for the help, though you've certainly done all the hard work. Good chapter. I look forward to the next part.
Reishin Amara chapter 58 . 1/29/2019
Snort» I really hope you dont have to make a magic chart explaining kingdom hearts magic oneday...or Donalds new OP Terra Flare is going to have you rewriting a few
Swriously though Kingdom Hearts 3 had some amazing battle scenes where magic like Stopga was used in the cutscenes! Also never though to use a compressed gravity type spell to capture a weapon just infront of someones hand.
Reishin Amara chapter 56 . 1/23/2019
Wow...OLD callback with Ashura.

To be honest im brutally curious what Auron will be...a Bahamut variant? Or perhaps Gilgamesh?(a non silly one like ff8)

Or perhaps one of the elusive summons that made boss reappearances in A Realm Reborn?
Reishin Amara chapter 55 . 1/16/2019
And finally he wakes up. Yeah...wonder if he knows his mom is a summon?
Reishin Amara chapter 52 . 12/5/2018
Another thought just occured...if Minerva landed on a world like Spira that already has a Will of the Planet, it wouldn’t even need to spread the lifestream completely. It would just need to hope the planet it lands on is willing to tolerate her presence and offered additions. This opens even more possible planets.

Incidentally,did you ever consider Final Fantasy:Spirit Within as a planet option? Ha,imagine on entry to the planet if she accidentally sent the Zeus Satelite flying into deep space due to a flyby hit and run. lol and unlike those guys,the FF7 crew could probally actually be effective against ghosts due to Magic.

Also, kind of wonder what could be done with FFXV (the Star scourge being a virus born of their creation goddess,the hints Ifrit was possibly good and Bahamut the real bad guy...oh geez...theorists have picked this games plot apart to the roots to find the hidden history of the game. Frankly sad we didn’t get that final set of expansions. FFXV will always be an incomplete game now.

I’m curious what YOU could do with that series,not as a FF7 xover ,but simply sending Ed there instead of Gaia how would he change things?
Reishin Amara chapter 50 . 11/21/2018
Kinda odd that Spira never had a freaking Leviathan counterpart in the Aeons when you think about it. On a world of mostly water...
Reishin Amara chapter 46 . 10/31/2018
Loving how things have went since omega traveled...you realize how much potential the Omega Travel plot has for numerous alternative crossovers...right? Even using canon Final Fantasy and eventually doing an Omega Travel has potential in a way...
iamthefang chapter 40 . 9/25/2018
Fun fact: the Adamantoise is an actual monster form Final Fantasy III, where they appear in the Lava caves early-mid game. This one is far larger and seems a lot more deadly though.
SpriteBlazer chapter 35 . 9/4/2018
Well fu-! They all missed the worst possible enemy of all. A desperate power hungry man who can see his power stripped from him that has the power to blow the world to the promise land and back. All the lives in the slums and all those about to lose there town or power to their town are in big trouble. I feel this will spark true chaos. Also did Edward make an esper? Can’t wait to see what happens next.
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