Ooooooof that was ROUGH. I can't even be mad at you for making me sob because it's not like you didn't warn us. But still...

Poor Emily. Great chapter.

Great chapter.

I regret reading this ending knowing i’ll end up crying-

I would’ve preferred if Ali died too, so at least I wouldn’t be bawling like a baby right now. Why do all the bad things always happen to Emily in your stories? I wanna see Ali suffer once (not that I like seeing Ali suffer, but it always feels like Ali is a side character to Em in your stories)

what can i say this was a fornomanal chapter ans worth the wait i dont really wanna say much cuz i dont wanna spoil it for other readers but all you really need to no is ur fantastic and talented u need to beleve that

You destroyed me

Omg! That was so heartbreaking.

Wow
actually cried reading this
I felt every single emotion
Absolutely amazing story

I.. I don't have the words. Fuuuuck I am crying so hard rn.

shit had me sobbing it was beauuuutttiiifuullll thank you!

Great alternate ending.

I can’t even begin to explain how amazing this story is. The characters were spot on, the premise seemed as if could have really been apart of the show. The emotions that you put Emily through were just amazing! I honestly have no other words! I hope you continue to write after you finish “In her eyes” because I just love your writing more than anything, you’re probably one of my favorite fanfic writers :))

Oh my god! I’m on the verge of crying

Hey: beforr i start this review, thanks for writing, thanks for sharing, and thanks for being your awesome self. seriously.

also, this starting scene. damn. has it all. Kinky, emotional, adorable... damn.

the very well done M-rated stuff aside: I love you SO much for making them go to therapy. and like, properly talk to the therapist instead of lying in circles and then stealing her diploma. so much. god.

and gina and cal and michael- ahhhh. fuzzies.

AND THE KIDS ARE IN COUNSELING. THANK GOD. T YOU. HOLY SHIT.

also i appreciate how you dont /redeem/ Zane but you give him an honest second chance- a light at the end of the tunnel, for him and his character as a whole. its very realistic feeling, but in the most optimistic way- which i think youre very good at.

"Everyone could use a little saving sometimes" yeah em, including your stubborn ass, goddammit-

god, fuck the Dilaurentis dad. g o d.

Im not tarnishing the rest of this beautiful cemetary scene with sarcasm, except to yell : HA THIS REF TO THE WINE MOMS. BEAUT.

GOD THE KIDS ARE ALL SO ADORABLE.

Man, every time you write Mona and Em I'm reminded of how much we missed out on with not having them be friends in the actual show. so much nuance, but respect in their friendship. gah.

AND ELI AND LILY KISSED. dawwwww.

and- that note of optimism at the end. i love your stories for that: all the dark shit, but always ending with faces up, looking at the stars. ... im very sleep deprived, unsure if that made sense or not.
gOD i cant believe its over. Ill try to keep the gushing in PM but like... damn.
seriously, thanks so, so much for writing. tell that inner critic of yours to shut the hell up.
and bc i value my poor, frayed nerves, ill leave reviewing the alt ending to when its Not 5 AM. Like it may or may not be right now. oops.
But seriously: *confetti confetti applause* a goddamn work of art.