I really love how you're playing Jaune and EMIYA off of each other the way you do. Shit is fantastic.

Well, it's nearly been a year since this was last updated, so this fics likely dead. None the less I wanted to let you know, it was a joy to read! Thanks for the great entertainment!

MAN this story is amazing! I really liked nearly every part of it if I'm honest and it is all the more saddening that it seems to be abandoned. Truly one of the best stories I've read so far. Thanks for sharing!

This is the best RWBY work I've ever read and plz come back and finish it…

Holy shit he summoned "Actually Satan"!

Nice fanfic I just hope it isn't discontinued

I really hope this story continues it's very awesome!

Archer can be summoned in other wars... in the future although he is still basically the same since he doesn't have a well known legend... he's more of a rumor than anything like the bogeyman he doesn't have an actual name, case in point when he was summoned in Fate/Extra he is literally named Nameless Archer because he's name is never mentioned in the rumors and his memories is basically non existent because he didn't leave a clue as to who or what he did before he started stopping wars and evil people's plans in the future... he does know how he died because that's one of the only record he has in history, the other being his skills and exploits...

Gah! It cut off at the best part! I so wanted to read the reaction to Archer when he realizes Saber/Lancer actually remembers him!

Still, it was an amazing chapter - amazing story, and I really loved it. It legitimately feel sad that this wasn’t completed, knowing I have to wait for more! T~T (sad face)

Anyway, really great job on this and I extremely appreciate the fact that you’re not outright telling us the pairing for this story. Whether it will be Ruby, Weiss, Pyrrha, or from out of the shadows Blake, nobody knows. But I love the drama that stems from it.

Hope to read more soon!

Damn shame this story died just as it was picking up its second wind for what I had assumed to be the latter half of the story.

Done here. Adding further servants is too big a stretch. Plus having Jaune as a protag was wearing thin on me. I figured Emiya would curb his particular brand of stupid eventually so I stuck around. However, it doesn't look like that will be happening any time soon.

But is this story dead?

Oh and on a more selfish note can you please make this Weiss paring story pretty pretty please with cherries on top? Honestly the lack of good Weiss x Jaune stories across FFN is so severe it is boderline criminal.

It is really well written story and I throughly enjoyed it so far, but I couldn't help but wonder: who could have built the working Grail in the world of Remnant? Because the Greater Grail is actually just disintegrated magic circuit of Justeaze von Einzbern built on a shit ton of mana from one of mana leylineshence the reason she's called 'the core' of the Grail. So whoever built additional Grail on another world would have to actually understand if not achieved the Third Magic in order to do so, just like Justeaze. Many of the crossover stories just turn to the usual 'herr derr it's Second Magic shinanigan I don't have to explain shit' approach to the appearance of Heroic Spirits in another world yet you seemed to actually go for 'another working Grail in another world' approachwhich is kinda rareso I couldn't help but wonder.

Man first thing I'm going to say here is that I really, really enjoy your writing. Having said that I'm not going to continue this story. To be honest it's just not my cup of tea anymore. You've made literally every character ends up as either hate them or love them and its just kinda annoying as hell to me. I can't bring myself to like a single member of Jaune's family and I'm starting to slowly dislike almost all of the other characters as well. In general this just kinda happens with most Fate stuff with me just because of how the stories usually develop. They're well made and entertaining, however, at the end of them I just end up empty inside with a violent hatred for a few characters and nothing else.