Keep going. Don't stop here. You just started.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! THIS HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL!

Keep this coming please... really interesting story I would love to see where this is going

Seems interesting, although I would like to see line breaks/a new line after a person is done talking. It makes it easier to read. Example is this:
"words" person 1 said.
"asking something" the next person said.

Not a bad first effort, and I see you also had the idea of including Raditz in your story, so I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with him. That said, I'm also eager to see what you choose to do with the rest of the characters. That aside, you should really consider getting a beta-reader from the site, to check your chapter for grammar mistakes and punctuation errors, as there a number of them in the chapter.

Keep it going!