You wouldn't happen to have learned how to make stories from Nebula the Hedgehog, would you?

I'm straying off topic, so, first thing I'd love to point out is, when it comes to stuttering, I think you went a bit excessive on it. e.g "A-A-A-A-Amy...Thank god you're alive" when "A-Amy...thank god you're alive!" would've worked enough.

Second thing I'd like to point out is that this story feels extremely rushed and I think it could use a bit of polish, aye? I recommend beta readers, they can certainly take you very far when it comes to creating pieces of fan literature to be remembered by many!

I hope these two points help you out in the future, I bid you a good day. ~Xinxxie

that was so sad that sonic have that horrific dream but I'm glad that he has Amy with him and she will be always be with him