This is really cute and I loved getting to see some of your Russian wordplay! This had to have been so hard to translate! If you translate more of your work, I’d love seeing even more of if in your writing, a fusion of a translation and Russian connotations and metaphors. It’s really fun to read!

Short but intertaing

I dont get it! What is it about buttons and whatsover and who's the heck mary?

There were a few grammatical and syntax errors, but you could tell what the fic was supposed to say.

I loved it, tell me if you continue the story

I like the idea of this story a lot! The translation is a bit rough in parts, but I could follow it well enough. It's really hard to translate clever phrases from one language to another! Thanks for adding the footnotes, it helps me imagine what the original would have been like.

"He intoxicated with happiness to the whole world"

That doesn't scan. It might work in Russian, but in English it feels really off. Infected might be more appropriate.

The whole controlling nature feels off as well. That's not a healthy relationship.

That said, I love the idea that there is no antidote to Happy Chat-Adrien. Keep writing