Reviews for Notice The Unnoticeable
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 6 . 11/6/2018
as long as it gets finish some day I can not wait for the rest
Charleneclark1988 chapter 6 . 11/1/2018
Can’t wait for rewrite xxxx
TheManyFacesOfAnon chapter 6 . 10/31/2018
Awww, I liked it enough and I hope the rewrite will be even better. Great speed Author-san!٩ᵕ๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ
Charleneclark1988 chapter 5 . 10/29/2018
Great story please update xxx
Natasha-Tenshi chapter 5 . 7/3/2018
I like it, hope to see you write more. :)
Charlene Clark chapter 5 . 5/29/2018
Great story please update xxx
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 3 . 3/17/2018
awww poor girl why he keep calling her a man though... anyway hope he is nicer to her latter and if you think that bane is big look for batman arkham games bane XD that is how bane is so post to sound! his Spanish came from a history there before gotham. its in comics and arkham games and animations
SoraMalfoySlythern chapter 4 . 3/17/2018
awww poor girl why he keep calling her a man though... anyway hope he is nicer to her latter
clockgirl191 chapter 4 . 3/6/2018
One half wants her to go to Bruce Wayne and explain herself and the other wants her too kick some Bane butt. Can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2018
I am really liking this so far though with the helmet on how are they not being seen as accomplices in this by mistake?
clockgirl191 chapter 3 . 3/5/2018
Its funny how bane thinks she is a he. Can't wait till he finds out I bet it'll be funny.
clockgirl191 chapter 2 . 3/4/2018
Ah were starting to see the story come to life. Love Doris, it reminds me a bit of Javris, Tony Starks AU. I wonder if this fanfic will be a show bane that he's good with a strong female lead or a timid soft spoken girl? Guess ill just have too find out. Can't wait too read more.
clockgirl191 chapter 1 . 3/3/2018
Like the start can't wait to read more
KiaraExodus chapter 1 . 3/3/2018
Liking so far. I'm a biker too, and did MotoX competitively back when I was a teen. Yep, Lloyd seems chirpy enough, working at WE could be costly though especially with a certain man mountain bout to enter the frame.

Looking forward to the next chapter.